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[aid] => mick
[title] => That deadened self.
[time] => 2008-02-12 10:49:28
[hometext] => This is just a poem about a little girl It's my first one submitted so please give me feedback!!! Thanks
[bodytext] => She feels alone But shes surrounded. Hoping, needing that love but she's still all alone. Help is something whispered often, but never has someone come to hold her hand and say I'm here. She lets go of her fiery rage melting away all of those smiles that she once held dear. All alone she wanders a dead earth her misery haunts her again. Don't say your sorry Because I just told you that deadened self who I am. The littler girl waves her hand, as if bringing her cloak that hides her like an unwanted stone, Thrown into a puddle by young boys. She disappears she says hello again but no one is there to see her. A broken smile spreads across and then she says goodbye loves. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Deadened_heart_of_a_rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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