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piled in distorted intervals; the broken placed on that corner
the fractured in the other
the shocked roar from the audience brought tears to the lighting and a twitch to my script. of course the actors knew something was going on but they didn't know what it is.
"jigsaw puzzles for eyes that camouflaged in the dim, who could have done this to him?" this was the real murder scene, that drew no emotion to the audience
i was wasting my time, i threw away the scales. I didn't care if my epic brought noise to them; when it played something they liked they cheered if it didn't it was worst. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SomeDude [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Your-Poetry.com doesn't give me enough recognition

Contributed by SomeDude on Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 09:07:47 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



there's about 40,000 dollars worth of damage in this place
piled in distorted intervals; the broken placed on that corner
the fractured in the other
the shocked roar from the audience brought tears to the lighting and a twitch to my script. of course the actors knew something was going on but they didn't know what it is.
"jigsaw puzzles for eyes that camouflaged in the dim, who could have done this to him?" this was the real murder scene, that drew no emotion to the audience
i was wasting my time, i threw away the scales. I didn't care if my epic brought noise to them; when it played something they liked they cheered if it didn't it was worst.




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Re: Your-Poetry.com doesn't give me enough recognition (User Rating: 1 )
by scroggins on Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 12:12:02 PM AEST
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the powers that be, force me to comment: I don't get it.


Re: Your-Poetry.com doesn't give me enough recognition (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 01:36:27 PM AEST
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Hey we all are .that one who feels WE dont belong, and dont get the attention....YOU do

Stop looking so hard

Its there, especially when you least , expect it


brew~ aka ayna


Re: Your-Poetry.com doesn't give me enough recognition (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 09:39:21 AM AEST
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Sorry I dont get it?? No recognition, do you not get feed back from your writes .
Do you not get support to contiune writing when the words on paper aren't as you intended? Take a deep breath Your Poetry.com Does provide recognition to the ones who contribute and more.

Whisper


Re: Your-Poetry.com doesn't give me enough recognition (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 17th February 2008 @ 12:51:47 AM AEST
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Well here you are in fourth place with a complaint for a title.....got your attention didn't you?
We are poets...complex, simple,make no demands on each other usually.
Our credit to one another comes from the heart.
Just write poetry and sooner or later you'll get our attention.
Keep writing....time is the best test....


Re: Your-Poetry.com doesn't give me enough recognition (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 10:25:22 AM AEST
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Hmmm for someone with over 24 poems... and who has never made ONE comment... you sure do expect lots....
Jenni


Re: Your-Poetry.com doesn't give me enough recognition (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 10:43:48 AM AEST
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30 poems you posted and not one comment to anyone else... this is an interactive site, that means you comment on others poetry, do you want a gold star for writing poetry, heres your gold star and a quarter too, it is 3 comments on others poems to one that you post, where is the recognition from YOU to US????????????? the way i see it you owe us the recognition at the tune of 90 poetry comments my friend.

hugs n' love nessa




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