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Array ( [sid] => 140039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On Love's Go-round [time] => 2008-01-27 04:51:05 [hometext] => Consider love as being a go-round where one day you're up and the next day you're down,it's rarely a smooth experience. At first it's exciting but, after a while it gets tiring ..... yet, time and again we choose to ride. ...! [bodytext] => On Love's Go-round

Time and again, two hearts do mesh
whether be passion, love or flesh
to takes what's left of long lost pride
to enter in, two souls collide

For when these ones, of love, who've lost
again this time fore go the cost
to take this leap, just one more time
on this go-round, once more to ride

And when you leave, what is to be
of all you've seen and yet to see
go blindly into love's dark night
thru all the pitfalls, void of light

A candle lit, small light to guide
to what a waits, the other side
of what will come or come to pass
to what will fail and what will last

For one more chance in this dark night
with one small candle this hope to light
Still do I wonder why those do stray
so much to lose ...... so much to gain

Please tell me now, where do hearts go
between the clutter of ebb and flow
before the pleasure, after the pain
what can it do..... yet stay the same

To blindly trek with those who've lost
again fore go, loves painful cost
To make this choice again to ride
on love's go-round, this one last time
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On Love's Go-round

Contributed by UnknownLegend on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 04:51:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

On Love's Go-round

Time and again, two hearts do mesh
whether be passion, love or flesh
to takes what's left of long lost pride
to enter in, two souls collide

For when these ones, of love, who've lost
again this time fore go the cost
to take this leap, just one more time
on this go-round, once more to ride

And when you leave, what is to be
of all you've seen and yet to see
go blindly into love's dark night
thru all the pitfalls, void of light

A candle lit, small light to guide
to what a waits, the other side
of what will come or come to pass
to what will fail and what will last

For one more chance in this dark night
with one small candle this hope to light
Still do I wonder why those do stray
so much to lose ...... so much to gain

Please tell me now, where do hearts go
between the clutter of ebb and flow
before the pleasure, after the pain
what can it do..... yet stay the same

To blindly trek with those who've lost
again fore go, loves painful cost
To make this choice again to ride
on love's go-round, this one last time

Copyright © UnknownLegend ... [ 2008-01-27 04:51:05]
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Re: On Love's Go-round (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 10:03:16 AM AEST
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And what a beautiful write this made, but I love every poem I read of your..
Truly talented in this field..

God Bless & Much Love

Re: On Love's Go-round (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 11:09:58 AM AEST
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Yes you have a certain.knack if I may say
Your writes, bring heart, and such feelings
Lots of true, raw talent

brew~

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