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[aid] => mick
[title] => Asphyxiation
[time] => 2008-01-25 15:16:01
[hometext] => IF SOMEONE CAN GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS ON HOW TO IMPROVE THIS POEM, WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED.
[bodytext] => Pulsing, throbbing, solid and brisk. Sodden and slick, violently thrashing. Can’t escape these cruel tremors. Satiate this famine, still never satisfied. Relentlessly follows in my wake. A feverish storm, ominous clouds hover above. Killing everything within me. Leaving me to starve. Fearful of those waves. Unruly as the wind. Crying out in frustration Can I trust myself? Temporarily dissipates. Free from its grasp for now. Though this cannot last. When it comes calling again… Once, twice, ad infinitum! I know I won’t be ready. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ryuchan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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