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i learnt from the best
run for your life
they are behind you
they will always be behind you
they say that yesterday don't matter cause it's gone
what if it infects you're dreams
seeping in through you're sub conscience mind
figure's and shapes from when i was learning how to walk
mom say's they run through the walls, she says there are angels guarding our trailor so to forget they are there
Don't blink, just sleep
i try to say theres a man in my sleep
He stands there all in black, faceless, speechless. he walks on air always following.
Words are taken from me, so i lay.. waiting for his visit
the songbird sing's it's song while the sun shine's through my open window while the cool breeze whispers in my ear
What do i do if my sub conscience collides with reality? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 48 [informant] => SamJoelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

monster beneath the stairwell

Contributed by SamJoelle on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 08:33:04 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i want to walk away
i learnt from the best
run for your life
they are behind you
they will always be behind you
they say that yesterday don't matter cause it's gone
what if it infects you're dreams
seeping in through you're sub conscience mind
figure's and shapes from when i was learning how to walk
mom say's they run through the walls, she says there are angels guarding our trailor so to forget they are there
Don't blink, just sleep
i try to say theres a man in my sleep
He stands there all in black, faceless, speechless. he walks on air always following.
Words are taken from me, so i lay.. waiting for his visit
the songbird sing's it's song while the sun shine's through my open window while the cool breeze whispers in my ear
What do i do if my sub conscience collides with reality?

Copyright © SamJoelle ... [ 2008-01-22 08:33:04]
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Re: monster beneath the stairwell (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 08:48:16 AM AEST
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Very nice write, kind of a sad touch in there but, goog sad..
God Bless

Re: monster beneath the stairwell (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 08:53:12 AM AEST
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I liked the difference in emotional tones within this write.

Dont blink just sleep...... cool line.

Michelle

Re: monster beneath the stairwell (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_dreamer on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 10:38:44 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this purely because it is well crafted... it reminds me of when I was little and had little fears like that, especially in reoccurring nightmares... well done. :)

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