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Again let me hold you this night in my
arms telling you that life for me is new
since thy soft whisper gave first little sigh.

Your fingers play a tune on me that drives
a wondrous feeling deep within I can’t hide.
Couldst we but hold this time throughout our lives
a never ending pleasure by your side

Tomorrow’s day advances like a thief
to steal away your close embrace from me.
But I do know our separation’s brief
Again with you as my new life should be.

Lips sweet and gentle fingers they do play
a loving tune that cries withhold the day.

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Withhold The Day

Contributed by ramfire on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Give me your sweet lips so soft I beg you.
Again let me hold you this night in my
arms telling you that life for me is new
since thy soft whisper gave first little sigh.

Your fingers play a tune on me that drives
a wondrous feeling deep within I can’t hide.
Couldst we but hold this time throughout our lives
a never ending pleasure by your side

Tomorrow’s day advances like a thief
to steal away your close embrace from me.
But I do know our separation’s brief
Again with you as my new life should be.

Lips sweet and gentle fingers they do play
a loving tune that cries withhold the day.

Copyright Â© ramfire ... [ 2008-01-22 02:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Withhold The Day (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 06:08:32 AM AEST
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this is awsome! i love the way you bring this write together..life can be so demanding but love withstands it all, and keeps us strong to withstand the rest.

Re: Withhold The Day (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 08:01:32 AM AEST
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tomorrows day advances like a thief. what a line.
Great work my friend

Michelle

Re: Withhold The Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 10:53:58 AM AEST
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This is such a beautiful romantic write...
Blessings

Re: Withhold The Day (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 08:23:18 AM AEST
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A beautifully touching piece. Just what the doctor ordered.

Peace

~Shannon

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