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I'd Like to Impress You
Contributed by
funnyface09
on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 03:37:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I like to make you smile
Smile at my cuteness
I like to make you laugh
Laugh at my silliness
I like to sing you a song
Though my voice is not perfect
I love to hold your hands
Taking a stroll in the park
I love to be able to hug you
If I have the chance
If I have the courage
Give me one day
I hope and Id like to impress you
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Re: I'd Like to Impress You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 01:58:30 AM AEST
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Wai, this was such a beautifully simple piece. I think the simplicity of it is what makes
it so delicate and wonderful. There is an emotion in this that even those that do not
feel it at the moment, can relish in the beautiful anxiety of it. :)
Hope your New Year is exceptional!!
~Breezy |
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