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Array ( [sid] => 13951 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Pinnacles [time] => 2003-03-08 18:40:00 [hometext] => Never give up that which keeps you alive, gives you faith, saves you when u're gone down a cold dark abyss. Life...embrace it! [bodytext] => Come with me...
Let me carry you off
To someplace new...where anything is possible.
A place that just rèéks of HEAVEN *grins*
I spent time here recently...
This absolute paradise!
Sat upon a hill
Gazing at the things below.

At the bubbling stream, the
Dancing ferns...
Squirrels babbling excitedly.
Rocks...
Holding the sparkly waterfalls.
Deers pèéping out now and then,
At the birds whistling their strange little songs.

Time lost significance,
As nature and the sweet progression of
Life...
Captured me...consumed my senses.
All dreams are possible.
One of mine came true.....
So when you're down and find that you can't possibly get up....
Like some-ones blocking your sunshine....
GET THE HECK UP!!!
Take a walk, sing a tuneless tune...hop, skip,

Remove the obstacle!!!
Scream if you have to,
Just let it all out...no matter how intense or petty it may seem.
Problems tend to pass eventually.
And inevitably...your's will too :))

Desires of the flesh are unimportant.
It's the decisions we make NOW that matter...
Time has this uncanny way of running away.
Don't waste it...
Patience is also a pre-requisite.
The rewards in the hereafter will all be worth it.
We will find the high point of everything someday.
i believe that... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Arwen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Pinnacles

Contributed by Arwen on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Come with me...
Let me carry you off
To someplace new...where anything is possible.
A place that just rèéks of HEAVEN *grins*
I spent time here recently...
This absolute paradise!
Sat upon a hill
Gazing at the things below.

At the bubbling stream, the
Dancing ferns...
Squirrels babbling excitedly.
Rocks...
Holding the sparkly waterfalls.
Deers pèéping out now and then,
At the birds whistling their strange little songs.

Time lost significance,
As nature and the sweet progression of
Life...
Captured me...consumed my senses.
All dreams are possible.
One of mine came true.....
So when you're down and find that you can't possibly get up....
Like some-ones blocking your sunshine....
GET THE HECK UP!!!
Take a walk, sing a tuneless tune...hop, skip,

Remove the obstacle!!!
Scream if you have to,
Just let it all out...no matter how intense or petty it may seem.
Problems tend to pass eventually.
And inevitably...your's will too :))

Desires of the flesh are unimportant.
It's the decisions we make NOW that matter...
Time has this uncanny way of running away.
Don't waste it...
Patience is also a pre-requisite.
The rewards in the hereafter will all be worth it.
We will find the high point of everything someday.
i believe that...




Copyright © Arwen ... [ 2003-03-08 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Pinnacles (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 01:59:44 AM AEST
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A wonderful poem. quite optimistic. I enjoyed this one. thanks a lot. venkat


Re: The Pinnacles (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:32:15 PM AEST
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Very upbeat and alive. I like it! And the message it hold is very true. well done!
Andrew




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