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Array ( [sid] => 139288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Limbo [time] => 2007-12-19 23:17:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Words don't come easy, and that's a good sign
Bled it all out, year ago, hate this line...
Not sure what to say anymore, that's not bad
Cause it means I'm at peace and I'm no longer sad
Limbo hurts worse then a wound or a scar
Cause you don't know where you're going
And you don't know how far
that you've come or you've gone, or what progress you've made
as you twist in the wind, and you wait to get paid
for the hard work and changing, one does to evolve
Confronted my demons, most riddles I've solved
Left me for dead on the side of the road
Discarded the garbage and I've lightened the load
But the limbo still stays, and the game still goes on
and the ******** exists, and my son stays a pawn
When the smoke starts to clear, and the judgement is made
And the tears start to fall, and the anger does fade
The path will complete, and the destiny known
And I'll sit here at peace, but I'll stand here alone [comments] => 0 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 48 [informant] => darkscorpio [notes] => Mod 9 12/20/07 Bleep wprd Please bleep the whole words. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Limbo

Contributed by darkscorpio on Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 11:17:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Words don't come easy, and that's a good sign
Bled it all out, year ago, hate this line...
Not sure what to say anymore, that's not bad
Cause it means I'm at peace and I'm no longer sad
Limbo hurts worse then a wound or a scar
Cause you don't know where you're going
And you don't know how far
that you've come or you've gone, or what progress you've made
as you twist in the wind, and you wait to get paid
for the hard work and changing, one does to evolve
Confronted my demons, most riddles I've solved
Left me for dead on the side of the road
Discarded the garbage and I've lightened the load
But the limbo still stays, and the game still goes on
and the ******** exists, and my son stays a pawn
When the smoke starts to clear, and the judgement is made
And the tears start to fall, and the anger does fade
The path will complete, and the destiny known
And I'll sit here at peace, but I'll stand here alone

Copyright © darkscorpio ... [ 2007-12-19 23:17:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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