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Array ( [sid] => 138816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Should I Die or Shoud I Stay [time] => 2007-11-27 10:30:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Should I die or should I stay
This is a question I ask myself everyday,
To face the world or just fall down?
The answer to this question I cannot say I have found,

I feel lost without a friend,
One person on whom I can depend,
I feel separated from the world, surrounded by a brick wall,
Alone, all by myself, finding myself with nobody to call,
The pressures of this world are just getting to me,
And the beauty of everything I find myself not being able to see,
I feel like nobody understands me and I've been placed here all alone.
With my head made of foolish nonsense and my heart made of stone,
Why is it everyone else feels love and emotions and me not a single thing?
I find it quite unfair, the only emotion I feel is hate and it is all towards me,
I hate to end this poem too harsh and dry
But not having any good things to say I might as well just say goodbye. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TooPhat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Should I Die or Shoud I Stay

Contributed by TooPhat on Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:30:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Should I die or should I stay
This is a question I ask myself everyday,
To face the world or just fall down?
The answer to this question I cannot say I have found,

I feel lost without a friend,
One person on whom I can depend,
I feel separated from the world, surrounded by a brick wall,
Alone, all by myself, finding myself with nobody to call,
The pressures of this world are just getting to me,
And the beauty of everything I find myself not being able to see,
I feel like nobody understands me and I've been placed here all alone.
With my head made of foolish nonsense and my heart made of stone,
Why is it everyone else feels love and emotions and me not a single thing?
I find it quite unfair, the only emotion I feel is hate and it is all towards me,
I hate to end this poem too harsh and dry
But not having any good things to say I might as well just say goodbye.

Copyright © TooPhat ... [ 2007-11-27 10:30:07]
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Re: Should I Die or Shoud I Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:35:53 AM AEST
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Very good write. Thank you for sharing.

Re: Should I Die or Shoud I Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by conorshawn on Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:43:47 AM AEST
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my friend you dont ride this boat alone, there are many of us out here with the majority being poets who fill these shoes.

we were put here for a reason. good stuff my friend.

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