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Array ( [sid] => 138657 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thunder [time] => 2007-11-20 17:15:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Its so hard for Me to tell You
sounds in this life,
hard to explain past life rushing back
the willingness to lose hold, and can`t.
I `will try..

Like painting pictures with every effort
frightened to leave them about,
like something that means something
the roar of a fire consuming it.

Like the memory of a new thing"
that held so much, putting it safely away..
and it then turned to dust, holding a object
in one`s hand..hot" and cold to the other hand`s touch.

Its hard for Me to explain the sounds in Life,
but they are about..
echoing through the past..finding Us again,
running head-long into the reasoning...
and it`s like.. Thunder.. Vincent
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Thunder

Contributed by Crow on Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 05:15:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Its so hard for Me to tell You
sounds in this life,
hard to explain past life rushing back
the willingness to lose hold, and can`t.
I `will try..

Like painting pictures with every effort
frightened to leave them about,
like something that means something
the roar of a fire consuming it.

Like the memory of a new thing"
that held so much, putting it safely away..
and it then turned to dust, holding a object
in one`s hand..hot" and cold to the other hand`s touch.

Its hard for Me to explain the sounds in Life,
but they are about..
echoing through the past..finding Us again,
running head-long into the reasoning...
and it`s like.. Thunder.. Vincent

Copyright © Crow ... [ 2007-11-20 17:15:26]
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Re: Thunder (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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Very creative, thought provoking write.
Good work, my friend.
huggs,
emy

Re: Thunder (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 01:21:20 AM AEST
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Vincent,
How wonderful to "see" you and read your words. I missed your beautiful poetry. I love your style. The last stanza was breathtaking. Thank you so much for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Thunder (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 10:36:19 AM AEST
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oh oh oh!!!! I am SO incredibly happy to see a new post from you! DAMN!! I've missed
your poetry.

This was incredible Vincent. So beautiful and powerful. yes, Thunder. How does
one even begin to explain? So exciting, frightening and beautiful all at once!

I love your style.

~Breezy
(btw, got your email. LOVE the last verse. I'll write to you soon .. PROMISE!!! :D)

Re: Thunder (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 03:08:02 PM AEST
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Hard for me to tell you the sounds of life...
that in itself is profound I understand that but you know that.
Loved this write my dear.....

huggers
Michelle

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