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[title] => Its just Not Yet
[time] => 2007-11-16 08:16:57
[hometext] => this is my first rhyme poem, and English happens to be my foreign language rather than my second. and I thought of sharing it with you here and see what you think, So please I need your help here and comment about it . about a woman who fell in love with
[bodytext] => By: Mana Ali In my room, laying on my bed In such a cold quiet night, while all were sound asleep I was thinking of you and of what you said Restless and distressed, it made me want to weep I got up from my bed Opened my window and looked at the stars above Thinking of what happened instead That I can't seem to get rid of Still in denial And still hard for me to take I always knew through our trail What I had with you was to valuable to forsake What you said, cut me and left a wound that will never heal Could all what we shared, all what we said, were not real What we had, was something very few have ever known What we felt, dreamt~ And in all these years has grown But in my heart, in my depths, my dear friend I know that I will never let you go and this is not the end Till my last breath, my heart will call your name That I loved ever since, into my life you came The name that I loved before you came along For some reason, I loved saying your name, like an old song Because I know what you did, you think it's for the best But deep underneath, we know this is all a mere test Could it be true that we will never be When everything tells me that you are the one for me Tells me that I will and be able to look at your face And to my Lord, I say thank you for your Grace! For every night I prayed, begged, and looked up to the sky To let me see the day I meet my love before I die To think otherwise, tears my heart and makes me cry a river Because my love will be in my heart and my soul forever My soul has fallen for yours~ before our eyes meet And I had to keep it inside~ And better remain discreet Thinking that one day, this feeling will soon fade away Instead it has grown stronger, in every single day And if it happened That my time had come before this dream come true I hope that we will in heaven After all what we have gone through Where there is no pain, no grief, no death can do us apart There I wish you be my eternal companion, so wishes my heart And then my friend, you will see as I surely will That everything happens for a reason, that's God's will We will meet again, and for that we shall never forget It's not over, because It hasn't begun, just not yet [comments] => 2 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 22 [informant] => solitarywitch80 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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