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[aid] => mick
[title] => Serial Killer
[time] => 2007-11-13 14:18:12
[hometext] => I wrote this about 3 years ago and would like to submit again for feedback
[bodytext] => he lurks in the darkness, desperate with an inhuman hunger, his mouth dry with the unquenchable thirst, the need all consuming, entangling him in its wicked embrace, he feels the rage, surging through his viens, he smiles to himself, NOW IS THE TIME TO PREY, upon the unsuspecting filth, such dirty creatures, with hollow souls, shouting lies and obsenities, yes, now is the time to prey he captures the tourtured, ignoring her pleas, with the blade of salvation, he spills her blood and takes all sin away, she is pure now, he gently kisses her cheek, and steps away, out into the light, people buzz by him on the dimly lit street, but they don't see the monster, they simply smile and wave hello, you see for he isn't a hideous beast, he is just like you and me, a magnificently beautiful creature, intellegent and charming, he smiles to himself, watching the them scury about, ignorant to his purpose, he laughs quitely, for soon it will be time to prey, for he is god and he will take all sin away [comments] => 1 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jalesc2120 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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