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Array ( [sid] => 138434 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE DEATH OF MY CHILDHOOD [time] => 2007-11-11 21:53:59 [hometext] => THE DEATH OF MY CHILDHOOD [bodytext] => Standing in the bathroom you stare at yourself for hours.

I watched you as you slowly died before my eyes

It killed me to know I was helpless to stop it

I remember days at the beach the sand so hot you would pick me up
And put me on your shoulders carrying me to the safety of the seas
Cool waters

Riding with you on your bike

The wind in my hair and fear in my heart

Exhilaration mixed with terror

The camping trips, fishing in the dawns light as the mist drifted across the water and joy filled my heart

Memories now

Old memories slowly covered with dust

You died the next day

Taking my dreams with you

Your funeral was dark; depressing dying to young yes for the thousandth time I tell them I am fine

The room so full of whispers “ cancer at 35 so young so tragic “

In a year they will forget

There will be someone else to feel sorry for in some other place


Loneliness, depression fill my body as I stand in front of your mirror looking to see if a piece of you stayed behind, just a small piece so I don’t forget you

Older now my memories get hazy, sometimes I can’t picture your face and
I feel that I have betrayed your memory some how


Death

Yours and mine

Finding you in the tool shed. I came to let you know that breakfast was ready

My life died with you that day

My childhood gone forever as I stood staring to scared to look away

Watching

Watching

As you slowly swayed like the branches of an old tree in the wind

Mother’s screams going on forever

Sometimes I wake at night covered in sweat listening

As her screams echo through the darkness of the house

She was never the same after you died

Changed

She became a recluse and died alone

Surrounded by her memories

Her tablets and an empty vodka bottle

A dark wood coffin rolling slowly out of sight and into a burning hell

Alone

No one left to love

Your shed torn down like my childhood

Gone now with the scarred earth to forever remind me of that day

Scarred earth where the grass will never grow

Scarred eyes no more tears left to flow
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THE DEATH OF MY CHILDHOOD

Contributed by black-reaper on Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 09:53:59 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry



Standing in the bathroom you stare at yourself for hours.

I watched you as you slowly died before my eyes

It killed me to know I was helpless to stop it

I remember days at the beach the sand so hot you would pick me up
And put me on your shoulders carrying me to the safety of the seas
Cool waters

Riding with you on your bike

The wind in my hair and fear in my heart

Exhilaration mixed with terror

The camping trips, fishing in the dawns light as the mist drifted across the water and joy filled my heart

Memories now

Old memories slowly covered with dust

You died the next day

Taking my dreams with you

Your funeral was dark; depressing dying to young yes for the thousandth time I tell them I am fine

The room so full of whispers “ cancer at 35 so young so tragic “

In a year they will forget

There will be someone else to feel sorry for in some other place


Loneliness, depression fill my body as I stand in front of your mirror looking to see if a piece of you stayed behind, just a small piece so I don’t forget you

Older now my memories get hazy, sometimes I can’t picture your face and
I feel that I have betrayed your memory some how


Death

Yours and mine

Finding you in the tool shed. I came to let you know that breakfast was ready

My life died with you that day

My childhood gone forever as I stood staring to scared to look away

Watching

Watching

As you slowly swayed like the branches of an old tree in the wind

Mother’s screams going on forever

Sometimes I wake at night covered in sweat listening

As her screams echo through the darkness of the house

She was never the same after you died

Changed

She became a recluse and died alone

Surrounded by her memories

Her tablets and an empty vodka bottle

A dark wood coffin rolling slowly out of sight and into a burning hell

Alone

No one left to love

Your shed torn down like my childhood

Gone now with the scarred earth to forever remind me of that day

Scarred earth where the grass will never grow

Scarred eyes no more tears left to flow




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Re: THE DEATH OF MY CHILDHOOD (User Rating: 1 )
by VampirePrincessRe on Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 10:03:36 PM AEST
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I want to cry..... But it's really good!!


Re: THE DEATH OF MY CHILDHOOD (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:34:55 AM AEST
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Very sad..But is a very good write.
I love reading this one..

Blessings


Re: THE DEATH OF MY CHILDHOOD (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:35:32 PM AEST
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awww that is so deep black it bring tears to my eyes:(
you did a darn good job on this.

hugs


Re: THE DEATH OF MY CHILDHOOD (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 06:41:32 AM AEST
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this is my second time reading this and both times it has hit my in a very good way




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