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Array ( [sid] => 138273 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreamers Mountain ridge [time] => 2007-11-05 00:05:19 [hometext] => hope you like this vision of a dream... [bodytext] => At the edge of sea and land,
On this vertex where I stand,
Where the widening sea collides against the sky,
While the dreamlike distance inundates the eye,

Dark fingers of jagged light descend,
From the heavens which they rend,
Through the ages and the storm,
Briefly lighting cloudy forms,

And at the ceiling of the mount,
Where the swirling clouds fragment,
Split for miles by golden light,
Stretching ever toward the night

Whose sombre eyes possess a glare,
Wheel through space devoid of air,
Can captivate this earthly crowd,
With all the silence of a cloud..

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Dreamers Mountain ridge

Contributed by zenith66 on Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 12:05:19 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional

At the edge of sea and land,
On this vertex where I stand,
Where the widening sea collides against the sky,
While the dreamlike distance inundates the eye,

Dark fingers of jagged light descend,
From the heavens which they rend,
Through the ages and the storm,
Briefly lighting cloudy forms,

And at the ceiling of the mount,
Where the swirling clouds fragment,
Split for miles by golden light,
Stretching ever toward the night

Whose sombre eyes possess a glare,
Wheel through space devoid of air,
Can captivate this earthly crowd,
With all the silence of a cloud..

Copyright © zenith66 ... [ 2007-11-05 00:05:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 04:09:32 AM AEST
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wow. zenith, what a brilliant and beautiful description of the awe
we feel when facing heaven-ward. You have captured the sunset
in its full glory and wonder. Nothing quite has the power to possess
me as does the sea, wind, clouds and sky ... and all that surrounds them.

Truly remarkable and indicative of a master poet. Distinctly
impressive, my friend. Lovely read ..

~Breezy

Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 07:28:00 PM AEST
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ditto, what she said.Breathe takeng write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 12:02:42 PM AEST
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esquisite, pen. beautifully capturing what a reader wants to see, and feel.

claps

endless

Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 11:45:03 PM AEST
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Really beautiful poem xx

Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 05:13:52 AM AEST
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Dear Zenith,
I loved your descriptions so vivid in my mind....
I could read your poetry all the time!
I love poets with lots of feelings.
Uplifts my heart and sends it reeling!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
consue

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