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Residual Costs
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 01:52:53 AM in AEST
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The residue of love
Is worn with a scar
From my inner heart
I still cry for you from afar
Knowing that you have gone
Thereby keeping us distanced and apart
This residue of love
Is apparent for all
Evidenced in my sad eyes
Personified in my clumsy walk
My hopeless affect
Clairvoyant in my muted talk
These lonely days
An emotional assault
The residue of love
Shapes a lasting impression
Forms a deepening hole
Materializes into a substantial indentation
Every night I fall
Every day I awake
Enter willingly into its unbalanced rotation
Repeating past mistakes
The residue of love
Stinks on your breathe
Reeks of regret
The lust remains
The passion has surly left
A proposition
Pursuing you to no ends
This residue
Gladly accepts
No man
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Jyssvw22
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2007-10-27 01:52:53]
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Re: Residual Costs
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 10:52:46 AM AEST
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Powerful last stanza, but the whole piece is full of strong emotions that resonate with the reader.
A wise person once said "No love lost, no love found". A statement couldn't be truer.
Well done jyss.
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