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Array ( [sid] => 137530 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torn [time] => 2007-09-27 03:16:38 [hometext] => Been a while since i been around thought id drop a post [bodytext] => Every time I see your face
My heart begins to race
I don’t know what to do
You would never know, but I love you

We have only spoken a few times
And I know you have a history of crimes
But those blue eyes make me weak
Take my breath so I can’t speak

Send my head spinning wild
Makes me dance like a child
Fills my dreams with your voice
Haunting me to make a choice

Sends me into deep despair
If I told you, would you care?
Do you even know what I feel?
Will you believe my feelings are real?

Or will turn your back on me
And start to fade from my reality
Will you take my hand and lead the trail
Allow me to live my fairy tail?

The twisted path I must travel
Will all of the strength in my heart unravel?
How did I let myself fall for you?
Will the love for you really be true?

The depth of my love you will never know
The pain in my heart I will never show
The tears in my eyes you will never see
And my love…you will never be
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 349 [topic] => 22 [informant] => nothingness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Torn

Contributed by nothingness on Thursday, 27th September 2007 @ 03:16:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Every time I see your face
My heart begins to race
I don’t know what to do
You would never know, but I love you

We have only spoken a few times
And I know you have a history of crimes
But those blue eyes make me weak
Take my breath so I can’t speak

Send my head spinning wild
Makes me dance like a child
Fills my dreams with your voice
Haunting me to make a choice

Sends me into deep despair
If I told you, would you care?
Do you even know what I feel?
Will you believe my feelings are real?

Or will turn your back on me
And start to fade from my reality
Will you take my hand and lead the trail
Allow me to live my fairy tail?

The twisted path I must travel
Will all of the strength in my heart unravel?
How did I let myself fall for you?
Will the love for you really be true?

The depth of my love you will never know
The pain in my heart I will never show
The tears in my eyes you will never see
And my love…you will never be




Copyright © nothingness ... [ 2007-09-27 03:16:38]
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Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Dimes on Thursday, 27th September 2007 @ 09:12:13 AM AEST
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I can relate to you. And, I must say, it truly does suck not being able to bring oneself to telling their significant other how you feel towards them. Just do whatever feels right.


Re: Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 08:45:48 AM AEST
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this is very sad and heart felt.. i think alot of us here could relate to this piece at one time or another in our lives.. you have expressed lost love very well and its such a powerful write.. splendid

rock on,

vampyress Jenni




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