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A mornings word 092607
Contributed by
wordsy
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Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 10:22:45 PM in AEST
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I came here to write
yet my words remain hidden
I came with ambition
yet nothing is written
I came with a fire
that's built upon passion
I came with tears
and a heart deeply saddened
I came with a need
that is yet to be filled
and brought forth my wounds
that they might be healed
I came here to write
this much I've said
to sum up my feelings
like raising the dead
I came here to write
or maybe just hide
from all of my fear
I've buried inside
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2007-09-26 22:22:45]
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Re: A mornings word 092607
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th September 2007 @ 02:23:08 PM AEST
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good work.
I think we all hide from our fears from time to time.
huggs,
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Re: A mornings word 092607
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by Dom on
Monday, 22nd October 2007 @ 01:33:20 AM AEST
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Interesting write this one, full of hopes and disappointments. Words can be used to write truths or deceptions (whether intentional or not). The truths are healing, cleansing and wonderufl, but so often painful to put down.
Really liked this one, and it has excellent rhythm.
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