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Contributed by
ktbugg
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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ive wasted my time
with you floating through my mind
im tired of putting on this smile
pretending theres nothing left
ive tried to stop feeling this feeling
but you were always good at making me fall
and I was always good at falling fast
now I wish that youd push me over the edge
make me fall again
catch me in your arms this time
seems anymore I crash into the ground
over and over, time after time
you could give me wings to fly
but trusting in you is like asking to die
and id rather die than live alone
i need your arms around me
we both know weve crashed
were buried in the rubble
but we cant set each other free again, not anymore
and you cant say that you dont care
i can see it all within your stare
you know we both feel the same
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ktbugg
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2003-03-05 07:00:00]
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Re: ???
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:07:08 AM AEST
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I read your poem and thought it was great!
There were 2 lines I came across that really caught my attention:
but trusting in you is like asking to die
and i’d rather die than live alone
Amazingly well put! *applaud*
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Re: ???
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:50:39 PM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: ???
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by TypenLutschen on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:06:30 PM AEST
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| sigh.... someone's a writer. |
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Re: ???
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by TypenLutschen on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:06:33 PM AEST
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| sigh.... someone's a writer. |
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Re: ???
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:53:26 PM AEST
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this is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Great job!! |
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Re: ???
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:46:01 PM AEST
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i liked this poem seems like you were putting your faith and love in someone who always dragged you down? *sighs* I've done that before and it left me feeling worthless and dirty. Great poem you are able to get your feelings across clearly.
Bobo (Joel) |
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