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Clouds float high above
Capturing my attention
Lost in magic skies

Colored clouds roiling
Seas of frozen particles
Ocean above me

Clouds seem to beckon
My brown orbs watching their shapes
Dance across the sky

Laura Howell Horner
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Clouds

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 12:01:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Haiku

Clouds float high above
Capturing my attention
Lost in magic skies

Colored clouds roiling
Seas of frozen particles
Ocean above me

Clouds seem to beckon
My brown orbs watching their shapes
Dance across the sky

Laura Howell Horner
9-20-07

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Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_cookie on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 01:18:46 PM AEST
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you cudnt have captured them any better!

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 01:46:42 PM AEST
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Gee laura this so beautiful and so peaceful to read and look at, what a sence of relief i
got reading this, beautiful as ever my sister.

((((peace 2u serenity of thoes cloud))))

Ben

bjps

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 02:21:21 PM AEST
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I swear sis we are living on the same corner of the world lately...... I love this, so serene.
Nice poem to end the day........

If I dont talk to you before you go have a blast!!

Loves ya

Michelle

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 03:33:40 AM AEST
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'Pears t' me there's no better place t' have yer head, Laura, 'specially when ya capture the moment with such grace 'n' whim! Fantastic 'n' enjoyable read.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:31:14 AM AEST
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wow, lovely haikus'
Great pictures too!
(I'm partial to the center one.)

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by TeamJK on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 12:44:53 PM AEST
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Beautifully presented, DHPoet.
Enjoyed this.
JK2

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:11:50 PM AEST
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nothing wrong with your head in the clouds we all do it great write

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th September 2007 @ 12:27:54 AM AEST
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nice place for a head to be, sis. wow. This is stunning. The words,
the pics, the thoughts .. so dreamy and peaceful.

I miss you hun. :( Life is such a nuisance sometimes .. always
getting in the way of living. lol

Sunday mornings are glorious, are they not? Hope all is well .. send
a pm my way will ya? *hugs you tight*

~MG

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Monday, 24th September 2007 @ 10:24:56 PM AEST
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Its so nice to get lost up there though, isn't it? So damn relaxing and inspiring to watch the atmospheric world dancing and swirling above us.
Beautiful words hun, and I love the images, particularly that second one of the pier that seems to stretch on forever into the distance.

Take care,
Dom

Re: Clouds (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 12:12:13 PM AEST
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the heads in the clouds as long as the others are with all
lovely posts of words, and pics
i want clouds and heads...lol

give me some.or lend me some

endless

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