Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	11-June 05:09:10 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 137365 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Driven Thoughts [time] => 2007-09-18 14:13:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

Thoughts....of you
seem to swirl through my head
leaving me with distorted visions
and so much indecision

Time seems to go so fast
but yet lingers like a winter's snow
Caught in this warped space
Never imagining you'd ever go

Torn between dreams and wishes
Hopes of a future, finally kind
Life turns to living nightmares
A true love, I could not find

Thoughts that torture an already
warped and medicated brain
Illness of sorts, you might say
that never lets me forget the pains

So far lost in a forest, ever dark
Canopy hides the sun and stars
Journeys like this, I often take
Driving all day, never starting the car.....

9/16/07
Laura Howell Horner [comments] => 3 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 22 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Driven Thoughts

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 02:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Thoughts....of you
seem to swirl through my head
leaving me with distorted visions
and so much indecision

Time seems to go so fast
but yet lingers like a winter's snow
Caught in this warped space
Never imagining you'd ever go

Torn between dreams and wishes
Hopes of a future, finally kind
Life turns to living nightmares
A true love, I could not find

Thoughts that torture an already
warped and medicated brain
Illness of sorts, you might say
that never lets me forget the pains

So far lost in a forest, ever dark
Canopy hides the sun and stars
Journeys like this, I often take
Driving all day, never starting the car.....

9/16/07
Laura Howell Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-09-18 14:13:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Driven Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 10:19:03 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Poetry of the higest caliber as always. Most
lovely a peice.

((((peace2usister laura))))

Ben

ty also 4 your comment

bjps

Re: Driven Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 10:49:39 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

There is something about this poem...i dont know why..but the image of the car completes the poem...fits in perfectly...life can be lonely at times...and this poem perfectly enacts that time...

Re: Driven Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 06:09:40 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow..thats a powerful peice...the description of that particular ..."haze" i guess you could call it..a haze i relate to so well..these feelings of pain, and being lost...just...amazing...it's like the saying "standing on the outside looking in." ...my favorate line is deffinantly the ending ..."driving all day, never starting the car...." ...wow...very powerful line there..i totaly relate to this write. fantastic job.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com