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So much that he needs,
He looks at me with a question,
He says, Answer me please.

He said mom,
Do you remember what you said,
About the pictures in the clouds,
That God gave a sketch pad to the kids,
The one's who have died.

I said, I remember the story,
As I looked into his eyes.

I could see the tears behind his little lids,
But not one failed and I wondered why,
But listen to this.

He said moma,
I wish Granny would write me a note,
And I could see it in the sky,
I wish she would too, son,
Then I wanted to cry.

I asked him what would he want her to write,
What would you like to see,
He answered then so quietly.

I love you Dylan,
Love Granny.
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What my little boy said

Contributed by sandypoet on Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 12:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I look at him with love,
So much that he needs,
He looks at me with a question,
He says, Answer me please.

He said mom,
Do you remember what you said,
About the pictures in the clouds,
That God gave a sketch pad to the kids,
The one's who have died.

I said, I remember the story,
As I looked into his eyes.

I could see the tears behind his little lids,
But not one failed and I wondered why,
But listen to this.

He said moma,
I wish Granny would write me a note,
And I could see it in the sky,
I wish she would too, son,
Then I wanted to cry.

I asked him what would he want her to write,
What would you like to see,
He answered then so quietly.

I love you Dylan,
Love Granny.

Copyright © sandypoet ... [ 2007-09-16 12:56:16]
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Re: What my little boy said (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 01:43:57 PM AEST
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A tender write this. One that caught my wandering eye. I guess because I am in some mentations of late thinking of my regrets. One of which is never expressing my love for my late departed dad. I feel the inklings of this write..missing the ones who have gone...and perhaps missing what we could have said and done..or vice-versa...I too wish for a sketch pad in the skies...for both my self to write and to hear the messages from the other side.. oh well...a touching tender write. One that evokes some thoughts within.

Re: What my little boy said (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Monday, 17th September 2007 @ 03:50:16 AM AEST
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Oh Sandy *hugs* I hope your little boy's doing ok. Losing a grandparent is hard.

Beautiful write hun. It brought tears to my eyes at the very end.

love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: What my little boy said (User Rating: 1 )
by GurLG0nEWr0ng on Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 01:32:45 AM AEST
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Aww, this poem is very sweet.

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