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Array ( [sid] => 137282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Family of the Devorced [time] => 2007-09-13 15:07:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the obnoxouse ringing
and pain in my back
what can I say
I had a rough night
The race to do nothing
but look back on the past
worry for the future
and forget about now
like conducting a band
clock work in hand
marking time in your sleep

Should I say what has been done
my dog whistle silence has almost won
speaking out every now and then
carrfull for what I say
when

I hear it loud and clear
it's all most always my fault
what happened here
but sometimes it's really subtle
agression between them
or the tv's just on.
i wish they would just get over it
sign the papers and be done with it
move away and it's the end of it
or have a 60 day trial
the CPS who pretend to care
they should just leave us alone
if they really wanted to play fair
i'm sick of strangers asking if something's wrong
i'm sick of deadbeats
giveing me a reason for this song
but all deadbeats were once alive
isn't that the question?
why did he die?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 23 [informant] => punkhead13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Family of the Devorced

Contributed by punkhead13 on Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 03:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



the obnoxouse ringing
and pain in my back
what can I say
I had a rough night
The race to do nothing
but look back on the past
worry for the future
and forget about now
like conducting a band
clock work in hand
marking time in your sleep

Should I say what has been done
my dog whistle silence has almost won
speaking out every now and then
carrfull for what I say
when

I hear it loud and clear
it's all most always my fault
what happened here
but sometimes it's really subtle
agression between them
or the tv's just on.
i wish they would just get over it
sign the papers and be done with it
move away and it's the end of it
or have a 60 day trial
the CPS who pretend to care
they should just leave us alone
if they really wanted to play fair
i'm sick of strangers asking if something's wrong
i'm sick of deadbeats
giveing me a reason for this song
but all deadbeats were once alive
isn't that the question?
why did he die?




Copyright © punkhead13 ... [ 2007-09-13 15:07:32]
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Re: Family of the Devorced (User Rating: 1 )
by vr91476 on Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 01:23:17 PM AEST
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great expression of feelings...




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