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[sid] => 137042
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Letter
[time] => 2007-08-29 22:34:05
[hometext] => this is a song i wrote for my band. Please comment, i need the feedback so i can make it better.
[bodytext] => I’m not surprised that the world hates me looking back at all my sins The truth always escaped me the words I spoke were never mine The solemn walls I’ve built around me to protect myself form what may come is the prison that damns me my greatest demon is myself All of my dreams lay shattered I can’t seem to piece them back the storm only gets harder the rains like a whip on my back I’m not surprised that you hate me after all the things I said to you The fights we had wont die neither will my betrayals I’m not so sure I can live like this with the words they scream all I want to do is fall asleep and never wake up from my dream I tried to make my life better I tried to live my lies and every time I thought I was helping I was tying another knot in my noose I’m writing this so you know this was not your fault my actions are the result of me break I just can’t live like this anymore [comments] => 2 [counter] => 323 [topic] => 72 [informant] => Shadow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
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