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Array ( [sid] => 136746 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From My Heart to Hell [time] => 2007-08-15 06:23:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Something torments me
Since the moment you left me
Screaming at me through a muffled phone
This wasn’t the time
To leave me in line
To give me no warning, to leave me alone

You put me in a haze
A melodic daze
My feet never touched the ground
I was a black cat
Lying flat on it's back
Unable to make a move or sound

The thrills are gone
I’m waiting for dawn
My body still aches for you
I press my cheek
Into the sheets
And leave a few tears within view

Try as I might
I'm still lonely tonight
You’ve still got me under your spell
You threw me to and fro
And then let go
Letting love fall from my heart to Hell
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From My Heart to Hell

Contributed by Adreana on Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 06:23:07 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Something torments me
Since the moment you left me
Screaming at me through a muffled phone
This wasn’t the time
To leave me in line
To give me no warning, to leave me alone

You put me in a haze
A melodic daze
My feet never touched the ground
I was a black cat
Lying flat on it's back
Unable to make a move or sound

The thrills are gone
I’m waiting for dawn
My body still aches for you
I press my cheek
Into the sheets
And leave a few tears within view

Try as I might
I'm still lonely tonight
You’ve still got me under your spell
You threw me to and fro
And then let go
Letting love fall from my heart to Hell

Copyright Â© Adreana ... [ 2007-08-15 06:23:07]
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Re: From My Heart to Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 08:09:07 AM AEST
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Very focused along with compelling intent, the pain speaks for itself, and the skillful writting along with the emotions of the artist
convey a most beautifuly down to earth peice
of poetry. Very lovely indeed not to mention a
true comand of your craft . . .

Ben

Re: From My Heart to Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 01:20:14 PM AEST
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This was an anguishing read...so sad...the pain of love gone wrong can be unbearable. You penned this very well, full of emotion.
Peace,
Laura

Re: From My Heart to Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 09:30:34 AM AEST
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i can relate to this poem.. i wont say i know what you were feeling because every person has a different experience when it comes to this sort of pain.

the guy i love as much as it pains me say i still love him definitely has that spell over me that creeps up on me late into the night when you lie awake all alone..

this poem is certainly to the point and very nicely wrote. I dont know if you meant to have an angry edge to it but it certainly doesnt give me that feeling like some of mine which is a refreshing take on it...

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