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Array ( [sid] => 136641 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't say goodbye [time] => 2007-08-10 17:22:23 [hometext] => Breaking up can be hard when your young. [bodytext] => Don't say goodbye,
I don't want to here those words tonight,
Im going out and getting loaded,
Cause I don't wanna here it's over,
Do we have to end this now?

Despite the problems we had,
I know it just wasen't that bad,
Don't say goodbye,
I don't wanna here those words tonight,
You had your space and I had mine,
Your all I care about,

This dosen't have to be the end for you and I,
Don't say good bye,
This makes me want to cry,
Even thought you're leaving,
My feelings will always be the same,
Don't say good bye,

I'll never forget the feelings that I have,
For those moments that we shared,
The fire we started that night in the rain,
The lightning in the kiss,
We were creatures one in the same,

Don't say goodbye,
I don't wanna here those words tonight,
Im going out and getting loaded,
Cause I don't wanna here it's over,
I guess it had to end somehow. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 336 [topic] => 52 [informant] => fadingaway [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Don't say goodbye

Contributed by fadingaway on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:22:23 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Don't say goodbye,
I don't want to here those words tonight,
Im going out and getting loaded,
Cause I don't wanna here it's over,
Do we have to end this now?

Despite the problems we had,
I know it just wasen't that bad,
Don't say goodbye,
I don't wanna here those words tonight,
You had your space and I had mine,
Your all I care about,

This dosen't have to be the end for you and I,
Don't say good bye,
This makes me want to cry,
Even thought you're leaving,
My feelings will always be the same,
Don't say good bye,

I'll never forget the feelings that I have,
For those moments that we shared,
The fire we started that night in the rain,
The lightning in the kiss,
We were creatures one in the same,

Don't say goodbye,
I don't wanna here those words tonight,
Im going out and getting loaded,
Cause I don't wanna here it's over,
I guess it had to end somehow.



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Re: Don't say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 06:29:42 AM AEST
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Yeah, but at least you're young and have time to learn from all the breakups and use that toward a better, more lasting relationship. It's just a little extra hard because the feeling is new. You will endure! :) We all must endure.

~Adreana


Re: Don't say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 12:33:22 AM AEST
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First, I feel I must inform you ... do not be deceived, breaking up
is hard to do, REGARDLESS of age ... trust me on that. In fact, I think
perhaps it may even been somewhat more of a challenge for the agéd
because the road ahead continually gets shorter and shorter and
the chances of a meaningful relationship diminish with every year.

Okay .. now that I'm done with THAT ray of sunshine! (LOL), your
piece is certainly filled with a desperation. An emotion that spills
out with every line; each and every word. It is heartfelt and
true ... your bravery and honesty shine throughout this piece
and like a star guiding a ship to the safety of the shore, so
shall you be guided by this inner light ... to a happiness you
never thought could ever exist! (Trust me on that also! lol)

Wonderful post. deeply passionate

~Breezy


Re: Don't say goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 06:24:57 AM AEST
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I have to agree with Breezy on this one...it never gets easier.....but ohhhh do we hope it gets better!!!
Great feeling in this write!




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