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You

make loving beautiful

you did right from the start,

should you ever be in doubt

look here in my

heart.

Come and see the promise that i made

for you and i, the one that says i'll always love you

till the day i

die.

That special moment that i knew

you were the one for me,

the one that has your name on it for all

eternity.

You make loving beautiful

from all the way inside,

but then with you beautiful

is something hard to

hide.

Yes you

make loving beautiful

the

way it ought to be,

i guess when your an angel

it just comes

naturaly.

Ben

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You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 12:35:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You

make loving beautiful

you did right from the start,

should you ever be in doubt

look here in my

heart.

Come and see the promise that i made

for you and i, the one that says i'll always love you

till the day i

die.

That special moment that i knew

you were the one for me,

the one that has your name on it for all

eternity.

You make loving beautiful

from all the way inside,

but then with you beautiful

is something hard to

hide.

Yes you

make loving beautiful

the

way it ought to be,

i guess when your an angel

it just comes

naturaly.

Ben

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-08-10 00:35:29]
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Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:03:22 AM AEST
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an amazing beautiful write!! such passion and expression of love and devotion with this.. very well done

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 01:52:47 AM AEST
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souls searching and loving write. such words to draw one into the heart. liked this piece. i hope someone can and will always do this for me.

endless

Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:12:25 AM AEST
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Perfection, Brother Ben...Simply perfection.
Peace, love and hugs...
Sister Laura *wink*

Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:21:37 AM AEST
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Comforting words of hope to those who wish to find their unconditional love.
Worded beautifully.

Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:59:11 AM AEST
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You write so beautifully, thank you for sharing

Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 09:48:09 AM AEST
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There you go again Ben. Beautifully awesome qrite. Gotta love this last stanza

Yes you

make loving beautiful

the

way it ought to be,

i guess when your an angel

it just comes

naturaly.

Mike

Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 07:59:30 AM AEST
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written with an extra pinch of sweetness, to the most blessed woman in the world:)

love n' hugs nessa

Re: You Make Loving Beautiful . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ATG on Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 02:29:56 PM AEST
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This definatley expresses how i have felt in the past. It makes me hope that this isn't a feeling from the past , and that you still have the pleasure of enjoying these feelings. A poem i can relate to. Thankyou. peace

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