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~...HUNTRESS...~

SultryRose's Signatures

Days float, one by one
Hung up in mem'rys mirror.
Slow down but never quit.
Life is only, a quake trimmer.

If at first you don't suceed
When all you've worked for
Scattered every where, no rime.
Try harder,
Repeat.

Never let go of inner glow
Pass it on, let others see.
Life ain't all bad, tears
Let me foget 'bout self, me.

Reach out to feller man
Plant luv seeds 'round.
Fo git selfish pride, let go
Free spirits can be found.

Water inner garden with tears
Sun shine comes another day.
Can make it flourish, grow.
The best recipe, I've found, Hey.
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TRY HARDER

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 12:39:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

~...HUNTRESS...~

SultryRose's Signatures

Days float, one by one
Hung up in mem'rys mirror.
Slow down but never quit.
Life is only, a quake trimmer.

If at first you don't suceed
When all you've worked for
Scattered every where, no rime.
Try harder,
Repeat.

Never let go of inner glow
Pass it on, let others see.
Life ain't all bad, tears
Let me foget 'bout self, me.

Reach out to feller man
Plant luv seeds 'round.
Fo git selfish pride, let go
Free spirits can be found.

Water inner garden with tears
Sun shine comes another day.
Can make it flourish, grow.
The best recipe, I've found, Hey.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2007-08-06 00:39:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:20:18 AM AEST
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Emy I have read this poem three times and this verse stands out.
Reach out to feller man
Plant luv seeds 'round.
Fo git selfish pride, let go
Free spirits can be found
Wonderful write, with some good plain sense in the verse. Keep em coming love from bern.

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 03:02:36 AM AEST
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Wonderful sentiments from a wonderful lady.
Much peace, love and hugs,
Laura

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 04:04:08 AM AEST
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Emy, good thought to keep that light around a person. try harder" I like that..Vincent

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 08:16:35 AM AEST
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wow this is amazing.. beautiful job.. wonderful lyrics.. this belongs in a movie or in a book to a story.. wonderful job!!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 03:29:17 AM AEST
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Fantastic lyrics Emmy, wish I could write lyrics like that. Well done my friend. Sue xx

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 12:41:29 AM AEST
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You got it going on emy, another gem of a song and poem. very nice my friend tottaly emystar.

((((emystar))))

Ben

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 11:09:58 AM AEST
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We are here, now. Why not keep trying, we have little to lose and everything to gain...nicely put!

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th September 2007 @ 01:35:33 PM AEST
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So beautiful and so much soul reaching out
to all that feel it . . .

hope all works out 4 you with that heart of yours and i'll tell joan you said hi . . .

((((emystar))))

Ben

thank you also 4 your comment and read.

bjps

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 22nd October 2007 @ 11:23:35 PM AEST
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A true kiss from heart to heart. So much wisdom in this piece. Beautiful my friend.

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 06:39:15 AM AEST
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inspirational and lovely:)

hugs n' love nessa

roses

Re: TRY HARDER (User Rating: 1 )
by l3stat_666 on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 03:01:02 PM AEST
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wow, very wonderful writen, good job there emy. very good. loved it. =]

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