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Array ( [sid] => 136473 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moving On (part two) [time] => 2007-08-04 05:56:56 [hometext] => Just my ramblings. Sue x [bodytext] => This fledgling lady with eyes open wide
Has crossed a path where guilt did lie
To start again she thought was wrong
To forget her love, and memories long

The love of her life on higher plain
Told her to live, yes start again
His time was limited, his death it came
How could she ever live again

Time it healed the grief and pain
No more the tears fell like rain
Instead an anger grew inside
And in no-one could I confide

Time it past I became so blue
Life was so dark, without you
But someone came , a guiding light
His presence made my world so bright

He himself had suffered rejection
We both were starved of much affection
We comfort each other, we found the key
We found each other, and we were set free

To live again , To move along
Plucked from obscurity, to now belong
No longer prisoners of grief it seems
And free to follow our ultimate dreams

So this fledgling lady who had no hope
Has now found strength, a way to cope
No fear I have, with this man so strong
I am at peace, I have moved on




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Moving On (part two)

Contributed by jerseysue on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 05:56:56 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



This fledgling lady with eyes open wide
Has crossed a path where guilt did lie
To start again she thought was wrong
To forget her love, and memories long

The love of her life on higher plain
Told her to live, yes start again
His time was limited, his death it came
How could she ever live again

Time it healed the grief and pain
No more the tears fell like rain
Instead an anger grew inside
And in no-one could I confide

Time it past I became so blue
Life was so dark, without you
But someone came , a guiding light
His presence made my world so bright

He himself had suffered rejection
We both were starved of much affection
We comfort each other, we found the key
We found each other, and we were set free

To live again , To move along
Plucked from obscurity, to now belong
No longer prisoners of grief it seems
And free to follow our ultimate dreams

So this fledgling lady who had no hope
Has now found strength, a way to cope
No fear I have, with this man so strong
I am at peace, I have moved on








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Re: Moving On (part two) (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 06:33:58 AM AEST
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Wonderful Wonderful words of hope and new found happiness...So warming and touching to the heart. Happiness always. A splendid write that made my heart strings strum life a harp.


Re: Moving On (part two) (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 07:03:22 AM AEST
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Sue, This brought tears to my eyes. I am so glad you are healing and moving on. You are a lady with much strength....I couldn't be happier for you. This write just filled me with hope. Thank you.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura


Re: Moving On (part two) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 02:37:46 PM AEST
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You have purpose still, in this life Sue. I'm so happy for you
to have found the peace and strength, and WILL to move on. :)
His purpose has moved to another plain, but yours ... right here ...
is breathing still.

wonderfully inspiring and beautifully touching. In every way.
It's moving that you've found in each other, a comfort.

Just loverly, hun.

~Breezy


Re: Moving On (part two) (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 05:50:59 AM AEST
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wow this is a very inspiring write.. it made me smile today.. you always have good inspiring poems that want people to reach a goal or move on from something and you always give the reader hope. awesome job as always from you

rock on,

vampyress Jenni




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