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Array ( [sid] => 136372 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Right and Wrong. [time] => 2007-07-31 11:21:25 [hometext] => "i dont know how to love you," he said, and she told him, "This is enough." [bodytext] => ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

‘I don’t know how to love you,’ he said.
‘This is enough.’


But the words were a lie.
She would never cease to love him
but he was frozen in time.
She would age, the signs would appear,
In wrinkles and lines.

‘Don’t be scared,’ he begged.
‘I’m not.”


She knew this was the safest place,
In an iron grasp so strong.
But he was so scared to hurt her,
He knew he was wrong.
It was so hard to disregard
Her blood’s siren song.

‘I’ll take you home.’ He swore.
‘You don’t have to.’


She wanted to be encircled in his arms
In a moment like this forever.
She refused to believe that she would die one day
And he would never.
But for the price of their eternity
She would give whatever.

‘I won’t take away your soul.’ He protested.
‘Its already yours.’


He wouldn’t make her like him,
And with anger, she cried.
But he couldn’t kill her like that –
Be the reason she died.
Yet she would never live normally
But with him by her side.

‘Please don’t leave again.’ she begged.
‘I wont.’


He kissed her with a promise
That she couldn’t believe.
But he couldn’t stay away,
To her he would cleave.

‘It will happen one day,’ she said. ‘Will you stop loving me if it does?”

‘Don’t be ridiculous.’ He told her, on both accounts. ‘Never.’

‘I’ll die one day, you know.’ She whispered in tears. ‘So why can’t I die to be with you?’

‘Its not worth it.’ he told her.

‘Yes, you are.’

___________________________

Inspired by Stephenie Meyer's Twilight and New Moon, and by this picture, copyright SentinelsMelody. Take a look at it, it's really gorgeous.
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Right and Wrong.

Contributed by Keilantra on Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 11:21:25 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

‘I don’t know how to love you,’ he said.
‘This is enough.’


But the words were a lie.
She would never cease to love him
but he was frozen in time.
She would age, the signs would appear,
In wrinkles and lines.

‘Don’t be scared,’ he begged.
‘I’m not.”


She knew this was the safest place,
In an iron grasp so strong.
But he was so scared to hurt her,
He knew he was wrong.
It was so hard to disregard
Her blood’s siren song.

‘I’ll take you home.’ He swore.
‘You don’t have to.’


She wanted to be encircled in his arms
In a moment like this forever.
She refused to believe that she would die one day
And he would never.
But for the price of their eternity
She would give whatever.

‘I won’t take away your soul.’ He protested.
‘Its already yours.’


He wouldn’t make her like him,
And with anger, she cried.
But he couldn’t kill her like that –
Be the reason she died.
Yet she would never live normally
But with him by her side.

‘Please don’t leave again.’ she begged.
‘I wont.’


He kissed her with a promise
That she couldn’t believe.
But he couldn’t stay away,
To her he would cleave.

‘It will happen one day,’ she said. ‘Will you stop loving me if it does?”

‘Don’t be ridiculous.’ He told her, on both accounts. ‘Never.’

‘I’ll die one day, you know.’ She whispered in tears. ‘So why can’t I die to be with you?’

‘Its not worth it.’ he told her.

‘Yes, you are.’

___________________________

Inspired by Stephenie Meyer's Twilight and New Moon, and by this picture, copyright SentinelsMelody. Take a look at it, it's really gorgeous.




Copyright © Keilantra ... [ 2007-07-31 11:21:25]
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Re: Right and Wrong. (User Rating: 1 )
by CoalMinersWife on Tuesday, 31st July 2007 @ 12:44:17 PM AEST
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Sweet very interresting I enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work!




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