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You’re so beautiful, but I’m so broken inside
I gave it everything, and now there’s nothing left
I can’t hide
Fading memories of promised realities I once had
Fighting to regain the magick I used to have
But I know, deep down, the battles over – I lost, you won
Please understand
I’m so scared of all this and I’ve fallen too low
I’m too tired to live; my wings are beating too slow
Take off my halo – it’s too special for me
Your angel’s got to go
So next time I scream into the wind, rain beating down,
Don’t try to save me, you’re not strong enough for this
Weak, unworthy of help, I deserve to drown
Let me go, let me taste the devil’s kiss
Choking on my tears, wishing the hurt would fade
I would trade my life for one moment without pain
And I’m so sorry, I don’t know how to try
I feel so sad and empty inside
Kick me down, tear off my disguise,
Close your beautiful eyes,
I can’t hide
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Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Hollow tears hide in eyes too haunted to cry
You’re so beautiful, but I’m so broken inside
I gave it everything, and now there’s nothing left
I can’t hide
Fading memories of promised realities I once had
Fighting to regain the magick I used to have
But I know, deep down, the battles over – I lost, you won
Please understand
I’m so scared of all this and I’ve fallen too low
I’m too tired to live; my wings are beating too slow
Take off my halo – it’s too special for me
Your angel’s got to go
So next time I scream into the wind, rain beating down,
Don’t try to save me, you’re not strong enough for this
Weak, unworthy of help, I deserve to drown
Let me go, let me taste the devil’s kiss
Choking on my tears, wishing the hurt would fade
I would trade my life for one moment without pain
And I’m so sorry, I don’t know how to try
I feel so sad and empty inside
Kick me down, tear off my disguise,
Close your beautiful eyes,
I can’t hide




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Re: hide (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:42:06 AM AEST
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This is incredible. You did an amazing job writing this! The first line really caught my attention, and after the second line I was hooked. Awesome job!

~ MoonlitAngel


Re: hide (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:21:23 AM AEST
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Nothing special??? This is AWESOME!


Re: hide (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 02:19:51 PM AEST
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Wow... Lucie this kicked ass I love your poems your heart its so beautiful. This was absolutely amazing. I can feel the pain in this. This was awesome thnx for sharing this.

Your friend,
Joel


Re: hide (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:12:28 PM AEST
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always your poems are such a striking read, and you do it here again


Re: hide (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:20:57 PM AEST
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i loved this, this is so lovely, i hope you feel better now, huggs always nessa


Re: hide (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 05:52:14 PM AEST
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truly amazing poem... i can see the words and feel the pain... blessings...




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