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Array ( [sid] => 136017 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => smoldering ash [time] => 2007-07-17 03:55:42 [hometext] => an idea I had thought of and ran with it.. enjoy everyone [bodytext] => The smell of the ash
intwines from the inside
is it a memory of the past?
or just what was chosen to be forgot?

The insicion goes beneath all that lies on the surface
of thoughts
reaching inside to grab what truths you hide

will it eat you ?
will you just let it seep through to
posion your soul with controlling the lustful ways?

reality becomes distant
feel the pain with those pent up memories
you chose to let sustain you from reaching completion

let everything go
as the smoke rises and filters through the air
as does the anguish you chose to hang onto

Vampyress Jenni [comments] => 9 [counter] => 349 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Phantomvampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

smoldering ash

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 03:55:42 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The smell of the ash
intwines from the inside
is it a memory of the past?
or just what was chosen to be forgot?

The insicion goes beneath all that lies on the surface
of thoughts
reaching inside to grab what truths you hide

will it eat you ?
will you just let it seep through to
posion your soul with controlling the lustful ways?

reality becomes distant
feel the pain with those pent up memories
you chose to let sustain you from reaching completion

let everything go
as the smoke rises and filters through the air
as does the anguish you chose to hang onto

Vampyress Jenni

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-07-17 03:55:42]
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Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 04:16:07 AM AEST
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Ooooo you did a great job with this.

hugs

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 05:49:54 AM AEST
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Right off the bat this is my favorite of yours.
The tittle ia compelling, a bit restful, and quite inspiring, it's awesomely beautiful.
I see a different you, you in a different ight.
along with an inquisitveness and yet the
feel of one who is a most compassionate
human being . . . Simply put, i'm floored by this one . . .

Ben

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 06:44:29 AM AEST
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Jenni,
Very well done. I enjoy the depths of your writing...always intense and on the edge.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 09:13:25 AM AEST
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wow .. what a great title, Jenni. And the thoughts that follow
are filled with a depth of emotion and examination that most
could attest to familiarizing themselves with.

this is almost hard to read, really ...

great job!

~Breezy

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 10:51:28 AM AEST
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Very good work, friend.
huggs,
emy

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 02:24:20 PM AEST
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Hey ya Jenstar~
I must say the title draws in your reader and your depth & emotional content hit right at the readers heart.
It's great to be back and reading your fabulous work Jenni~ Keep it up girl...

*hugs you tight*
sue m

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 06:33:10 AM AEST
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Woo..this is very good work, I imagine a little bit in all of us. I enjoyed this. Vincent

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 06:54:54 AM AEST
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so clever how you worded this poem, so true the reality will seem distant when in this deep place, yet; you give one hope as we read on-to let everything go excellent write!

hugs n' love nessa

roses

Re: smoldering ash (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 05:47:30 PM AEST
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Wow Jenni, stunning, vivid imagery here! You use the images to make the impact of the poem even more powerful.

Great write, and I love the title!

Dom

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