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Array ( [sid] => 135974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Glad I died. [time] => 2007-07-15 03:13:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This test that you try to impose
Who are you imposing?
Imposter.

The great reach of your grasp
Reaches just a little less
Than the grasp of your reach

Just keep reaching and you might just
Touch the only thing that you can trust
In this myriad you have constructed
This simple mask I have deconstructed

The benefits of these ashes
Always the first for con-crashes
This broken circle that you confide
Behind your shallow, money filled eyes

Toss me aside
And I will say
It's just another
average day

Take me aside
And tell me the lies
And I will say
I'm glad I died

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Glad I died.

Contributed by xnoybis on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 03:13:05 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

This test that you try to impose
Who are you imposing?
Imposter.

The great reach of your grasp
Reaches just a little less
Than the grasp of your reach

Just keep reaching and you might just
Touch the only thing that you can trust
In this myriad you have constructed
This simple mask I have deconstructed

The benefits of these ashes
Always the first for con-crashes
This broken circle that you confide
Behind your shallow, money filled eyes

Toss me aside
And I will say
It's just another
average day

Take me aside
And tell me the lies
And I will say
I'm glad I died

Today.

Copyright © xnoybis ... [ 2007-07-15 03:13:05]
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Re: Glad I died. (User Rating: 1 )
by Nates_JrAT on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 09:24:12 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed how you wrote this.

Re: Glad I died. (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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Hmmm though the title sounds so sadly morbid, I did really enjoy the read. It had some life to it, some grit...then I get to the end and there it is again...

"I'm glad I died

Today"

Wow the finality in those words...that sadness...like all hope is lost. It just made me think hard on the feelings of one dying inside... Good write.
Peace,
Laura

Re: Glad I died. (User Rating: 1 )
by Tot on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:13:16 AM AEST
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I love the style that you used in writing this poem, not to mention that the poem itself is fantastic! Excellent write~Tot

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