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[sid] => 135854
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Untitled Love
[time] => 2007-07-10 12:04:05
[hometext] => I'm not 100% finished with it but i would like some eyes to take a look at it and critic it and give me some pointers on how i can make it better.
[bodytext] => There is a feeling I get that can never be erased. It’s a feeling she gives me every time I see her face. I don’t know why but I would like to see her in lace. Whilst I admire her face for nothing shall ever take its place. There is nothing more that I’d like to do then to grab her and never come unglued. If I could I would stick to her forever and ever and watch our feelings take flight. She makes me want to tell her “Everything will be alright,” as I grab her and hold her tight. For there is nothing more I’d like to do then end her plight. She is like a delicate rose that has taken its thorny steam and wrapped around my heart. Suffocating it, yet letting it live freely and happily whilst ripping it apart. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Livin_In_Sin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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