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My pillows lift me with my bed towards the gentle smiling moon,

And my heads heavy thoughts are swept away on gentle beams of light,
Proceeding through the border of consciousness, Lucid is the night.

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I feel the night approaching

Contributed by zenith66 on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 09:57:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I feel the night approaching in purple zephyrs and light cloud cover,
My pillows lift me with my bed towards the gentle smiling moon,

And my heads heavy thoughts are swept away on gentle beams of light,
Proceeding through the border of consciousness, Lucid is the night.

Copyright © zenith66 ... [ 2007-06-19 09:57:00]
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Re: I feel the night approaching (User Rating: 1 )
by StephaniePaige on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:20:33 AM AEST
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This made me feel like I needed a nap, and I do love to sleep..so i enjoyed reading this =],

Re: I feel the night approaching (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 11:31:27 AM AEST
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ahhh
this flow made drift......

Re: I feel the night approaching (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 11:34:43 AM AEST
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ahhh
this flow made drift......

Re: I feel the night approaching (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 02:44:44 PM AEST
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WOW! zenith, for such a short write, you captured an
ethereal feeling so exceptionally well. (and I ADORE the
mention of the moon!!! DElightful!!)

I love how you ended this, the last four words make for a
brilliant finale. Your descriptions and use of imagery
are flawless ... what a way to be taken off to dreamland,
(where I am headed in a few ..)

Thank you for this. Spectacular!!

~Breezy

Re: I feel the night approaching (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 12:01:15 PM AEST
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thought i would red more of your writes, and i can say wow
that was stunning with a few lines

endless

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