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Array ( [sid] => 135101 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair [time] => 2007-06-10 05:43:19 [hometext] => Flipping through my poetry notebooks from years and years back,this one popped out at me! [bodytext] => I'm haunted by your laughter,
my tears are like summer rain,
Memories of us wrap me
in a cloak of Pain,........
My heart is Bruised and Bleeding,
and my soul is now Stained,

I need you,I want you,
your love in return once
again I must obtain...
So living on wishes and prayers
in Dark Saddened days I remain.

I alone must board this,
Despair filled Train,

Under The Track Marks
there used to be A Vein,
not being able to hold
you close,is driving me
Insane,
Wondering what's going on
in your Brain,
My Souls Always Drained........

PepperMint*Ki$$e$* [comments] => 5 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 48 [informant] => InfinitePoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair

Contributed by InfinitePoet on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 05:43:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm haunted by your laughter,
my tears are like summer rain,
Memories of us wrap me
in a cloak of Pain,........
My heart is Bruised and Bleeding,
and my soul is now Stained,

I need you,I want you,
your love in return once
again I must obtain...
So living on wishes and prayers
in Dark Saddened days I remain.

I alone must board this,
Despair filled Train,

Under The Track Marks
there used to be A Vein,
not being able to hold
you close,is driving me
Insane,
Wondering what's going on
in your Brain,
My Souls Always Drained........

PepperMint*Ki$$e$*

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Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 09:42:22 AM AEST
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i love the rhyming, the rhythm...the raw emotion.

great write.

- Bethani -

Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 01:45:59 PM AEST
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Excellent piece of writing...the last stanza just nailed it.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura

Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 04:01:49 PM AEST
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Wish that you could write like that...? You do and better this is amazing....It flows smoothly and has a perfect rythem....I love it.If you want more pm me..I have hundreds.

Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:06:44 PM AEST
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this was passionate and it flowed superbly, great work.

-Phil

Re: Passenger Aboard the Train of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthann on Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 12:44:01 AM AEST
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i am to on that train of dispair, i wonder and wonder about his love. he want everything to be his way. he doesnt understand by broken heart he just sends me away. i love your poem.

ruthann

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