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Array ( [sid] => 135013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cheating Tears [time] => 2007-06-07 10:48:08 [hometext] => No comment [bodytext] => I come to you
With tears in my eyes
Wou pull me into your lap
And ask me "why?"

I look up at you,
then look away
"You wouldnt under stand."
I say.

You hold my face in your hands,
And tell me, "its okay, I'll understand."

I look up,
while you stare down at me,
and i feel like a whore
"Its not only you, theres one more."

Now with shock in your eyes
You look back at me with surprise
"Please dont be mad!" i plead
You look away, and i know you're upset with me.

You're there for me,
Im there for you too
Ending this relation with the other guy
is what i have to do.

I love you so much,
And i thought I loved him as well
but now I know liking him alot
is all that I felt. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 43 [informant] => TheSara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Cheating Tears

Contributed by TheSara on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 10:48:08 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I come to you
With tears in my eyes
Wou pull me into your lap
And ask me "why?"

I look up at you,
then look away
"You wouldnt under stand."
I say.

You hold my face in your hands,
And tell me, "its okay, I'll understand."

I look up,
while you stare down at me,
and i feel like a whore
"Its not only you, theres one more."

Now with shock in your eyes
You look back at me with surprise
"Please dont be mad!" i plead
You look away, and i know you're upset with me.

You're there for me,
Im there for you too
Ending this relation with the other guy
is what i have to do.

I love you so much,
And i thought I loved him as well
but now I know liking him alot
is all that I felt.

Copyright © TheSara ... [ 2007-06-07 10:48:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cheating Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by silver_crested_shadow on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:06:40 PM AEST
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You now I didn't know if you put "No Comment" or if that was just there, but i want to comment on this if you don't mind.
But I really love this poem, and you have placed words into their place with good emotion and feeling. true story or not i've been in the same position as The Guy in this poem, I enjoyed reading it, Good Write

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