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Anger
Contributed by
5MinutePoet
on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 08:46:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Anger pain,
Roting flesh,
Happy days,
More or less,
Loving one,
Living lies,
From lips,
And from thighs,
Coaxing with,
Those promises,
To detail,
What sorrow is,
To educate,
Scholar'd me,
To comprehend,
And set it free,
Uncomplicate,
Your politics,
Stop your whoring,
Or turning tricks,
No mind play,
It stops now,
Seek Valhalla,
Don't ask how,
Don't think,
Don't comply,
Don't ask runes,
Don't dare scry,
Don't curse,
Or hex on me,
Don't avenge
My sympathy,
Just parle,
We'll talk awhile,
About your death,
And my denial,
Tortue becons,
My mind astray,
Next i see you,
It's killing day
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Re: Anger
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by TheSpiritx on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 05:04:44 PM AEST
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I wrote a poem of similar style once. This, aside from spelling errors, is fantastic - you held a strong iambic feel and an amazing rhyme scheme for the short line lengths you have. Excellent work - I would love to see this edited for spelling a little and reposted!
Thanks for submitting!
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Re: Anger
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by brew on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:07:06 PM AEST
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Um not hurt and angred are you? Just WOW.......would hate to see the redness in your eyes, for them......Deep and very STRONG......Not bad. It was simple and straight to the point.
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