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Array ( [sid] => 134784 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Would Love [time] => 2007-05-29 15:28:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

I would love to be so precious
to someone else's eyes
I would love to be honored
sit on their pedestal high

I would love to be sheltered
by someone else's arms
I would love to be protected
and always kept from harm

I would love to find the one
who would never damage my soul
I would love to find that man
before I age and grow too old

5-28-07
Laura Horner [comments] => 6 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 61 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I Would Love

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 03:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I would love to be so precious
to someone else's eyes
I would love to be honored
sit on their pedestal high

I would love to be sheltered
by someone else's arms
I would love to be protected
and always kept from harm

I would love to find the one
who would never damage my soul
I would love to find that man
before I age and grow too old

5-28-07
Laura Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-05-29 15:28:31]
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Re: I Would Love (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 01:20:36 AM AEST
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(((((((peace and gentle healing for you )))))))))

my sister Laura . . .

beautifuly said as always from your heart.

Ben

Re: I Would Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 06:48:51 AM AEST
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a beautiful expressive write from you my dear friend. its so sad though. You can definately feel the longing in this poem of the security in love. well expressed. exquiste. I hope you are not feeling this way..

Jennittude

Re: I Would Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:22:25 AM AEST
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Oh my dear, sweet sis and poetic wonder... this ripped my heart
open wide. There is a plea in this that is gripping and laced
with an intensity that tears the flesh. Your heart is such a
shiny and beautiful thing. Never should you have to struggle
because of it, sweets. I'm with Ben. Hoping for a gentle
healing to surround you soon with all the love, hope and
gentleness you SO deserve.

You write with the most raw and honest emotion, hun.

peace and hugs to you ...

~Breezy

Re: I Would Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:29:57 AM AEST
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I could say so many things about this write, and the thoughts it brings to my mind. I have loved and lost... good read for me. Vincent

Re: I Would Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:58:19 AM AEST
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Its better to have and lost.yet seek and find.it will happen.......Keep with in the heart, and you shall see.....it about you and them......Beautiful, sad and soulful write......I hoe with ALL my heart you find a one who can love forever, and unconditonally............that is the key.

Hugs
Brew~

Re: I Would Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 09:15:22 AM AEST
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even in your pain your poem is so beautifully written, from heart and soul, im so sorry your hurting dear friend, may you find peace, love and happiness,

love n' hugs nessa

roses

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