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Hold my hand and tell me that we are okay.
Speak of the natural things that people say.
For if darkness comes to soon,
at the falling of the moon.
Then my restless heart must fly from earth today.

Share earth delights of skys and trees.
Waterways and mountains, whispy breeze.
Leave emotions misted on the earth.
Your have roots of gold, now show your worth.
Let my restless heart fly with the earth.

If every moonlight night reflects the sky,
Show the stars, the soul of you and I.
Take the milky way and fly my path.
Let this be my epitaph.
Then let my restless heart be of this earth. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 74 [informant] => needledancing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => surreal )

Held In Loving Arms

Contributed by needledancing on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 02:50:33 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

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Hold my hand and tell me that we are okay.
Speak of the natural things that people say.
For if darkness comes to soon,
at the falling of the moon.
Then my restless heart must fly from earth today.

Share earth delights of skys and trees.
Waterways and mountains, whispy breeze.
Leave emotions misted on the earth.
Your have roots of gold, now show your worth.
Let my restless heart fly with the earth.

If every moonlight night reflects the sky,
Show the stars, the soul of you and I.
Take the milky way and fly my path.
Let this be my epitaph.
Then let my restless heart be of this earth.

Copyright © needledancing ... [ 2007-05-23 14:50:33]
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Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:01:28 PM AEST
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THe pic carried me away with your words of such soft and soothing moments. Beautiful.

Michelle

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:46:42 PM AEST
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I could get lost in that picture and the write as well. Beautiful piece of poetry. (the pic reminds me of artwork I've seen on Leaning Tree cards...they're fabulous) Thank you so much for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by slay797 on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 05:51:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, very magestic

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 10:24:50 PM AEST
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Very imaginative and beautiful, the picture blended well with your wonderful poem.
FRANCO.

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:29:58 AM AEST
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aside from the obvious beauty of both poem and picture, the deeper underlying expression is what i love, the acceptance of your place in life and acceptance of possible demise, put so softly, with preference of life:)

love n' hugs nessa

roses

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 07:32:23 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem and a really beautiful picture. I guess that it makes sense that we choose of paths in one way or another. Absolutely Brilliant!

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:11:50 AM AEST
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This is stunning. I mean it takes my breath away. You are fast approaching a region i call discovery in your self, i wonder if you know it? i certainly do. . .

((((ND))))

Ben

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:39:03 AM AEST
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wow this is so nicely written. its like taking a journey.. sounds like it could be a fairy tale.. great job here .. such lovely wording and nice pic to go with it.. great job

Vampyress Jenni

Re: Held In Loving Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 12:54:53 PM AEST
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The WHOLE took me way and beyond too all........ Beautiful

Great post

Brew~

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