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Array ( [sid] => 134606 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears in a pillow - Part 2. [time] => 2007-05-22 20:48:40 [hometext] => What happens when the girl you love the most, leaves you and leads a normal life and you are left behind...shattered and hurt! [bodytext] => So, I'm in bed, tryin my best to sleep.
Its been a fine day, i aint gonna think deep...
hmm, good thoughts about you, thats fine...
It will be a new day soon and ill rise and shine.

Do you ever think of me, I sometimes wonder
Damn, here I go again and my mind starts to wander
Then I imagine you lyin besides me
Hugs and kisses all over my body

It feels so real, i sense you are near
And you say "Honey, I love you' in my ear
I smile and say "I love you too"
Wishing that this will one day come true

And then I fall asleep thinking about you
In my dreams all this seems so true
Look in your dream and tell me what you see?
Every now and then is it me? is it me?

I keep telling myself you will be mine tommorow
Half awake, I get up and adjust my pillow
Then my eyes open and you are nowhere to be seen
And I feel so lonely ONCE AGAIN! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 32 [informant] => madhusudan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Tears in a pillow - Part 2.

Contributed by madhusudan on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 08:48:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



So, I'm in bed, tryin my best to sleep.
Its been a fine day, i aint gonna think deep...
hmm, good thoughts about you, thats fine...
It will be a new day soon and ill rise and shine.

Do you ever think of me, I sometimes wonder
Damn, here I go again and my mind starts to wander
Then I imagine you lyin besides me
Hugs and kisses all over my body

It feels so real, i sense you are near
And you say "Honey, I love you' in my ear
I smile and say "I love you too"
Wishing that this will one day come true

And then I fall asleep thinking about you
In my dreams all this seems so true
Look in your dream and tell me what you see?
Every now and then is it me? is it me?

I keep telling myself you will be mine tommorow
Half awake, I get up and adjust my pillow
Then my eyes open and you are nowhere to be seen
And I feel so lonely ONCE AGAIN!




Copyright © madhusudan ... [ 2007-05-22 20:48:40]
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Re: Tears in a pillow - Part 2. (User Rating: 1 )
by RaineBurkhart on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 10:31:30 PM AEST
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wow when i read this it makes me feel alone and afraid, like nothin i can do to fix my relationship, keep it up!
RAINE


Re: Tears in a pillow - Part 2. (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 06:35:19 AM AEST
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WEll dont let your tears cloud your eyes..make it better, and hopefully it will get better, sad write, and deeply felt..... Great post


Brew~




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