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Array ( [sid] => 134559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Love You. [time] => 2007-05-21 10:30:43 [hometext] => This is written about the other day. [bodytext] => You embrace was soft.
Your gripping was loose.
Your arms were strong.
But you gave no abuse.

Your fingers were placed,
In the gaps of mine.
You held me gently,
As I cried and cried.

You looked so worried,
As I broke in your arms.
As I wept and sobbed,
In your protective arms.

You held me softly,
In your gentle grip.
And wiped the tears from my eyes.
And the snot from my lips.

You whispered softly,
That you’ll always love me.
Then hugged me again,
Until I felt at ease.

We affectionately kissed,
With my hands in yours.
Your eyes were alight,
Like glowing stars.

We lay back together,
Me over you.
And you held me close,
As I said ‘I love you’!
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I Love You.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 10:30:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You embrace was soft.
Your gripping was loose.
Your arms were strong.
But you gave no abuse.

Your fingers were placed,
In the gaps of mine.
You held me gently,
As I cried and cried.

You looked so worried,
As I broke in your arms.
As I wept and sobbed,
In your protective arms.

You held me softly,
In your gentle grip.
And wiped the tears from my eyes.
And the snot from my lips.

You whispered softly,
That you’ll always love me.
Then hugged me again,
Until I felt at ease.

We affectionately kissed,
With my hands in yours.
Your eyes were alight,
Like glowing stars.

We lay back together,
Me over you.
And you held me close,
As I said ‘I love you’!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2007-05-21 10:30:43]
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Re: I Love You. (User Rating: 1 )
by Nenny on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:18:25 AM AEST
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nice poem...reminds me of me and my boyfriend because this is exactly what he would do for me...sorry to hear something was sad or bad to upset you this way but at least you have that special love to comfort you and be there for you...good read!!

Re: I Love You. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:22:00 AM AEST
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This write is sadly beeautifull.
Well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: I Love You. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:22:01 AM AEST
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This write is sadly beeautifull.
Well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: I Love You. (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 8th December 2007 @ 02:16:53 AM AEST
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We all need our pillars, I'm glad you have a strong, caring one. I love the line about breaking in his arms, that was an awesome line! In fact, I stopped reading and and said that out loud, it was so good.
Take care,
David

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