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Array ( [sid] => 134519 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost Two Good Friends Last Night [time] => 2007-05-19 21:15:50 [hometext] => I really screwed up and lost two good friends that I had worked hard to get...all down the drain... [bodytext] => Lost two good friends last night
Said what was on my mind
But my mind was not
In the right space and time
Panic attack set in the present
Thinking about the past and future
Got confused, which road to take
They were there to help
I didn’t believe them then
But I believe them now
That they’re gone
Lost two good friends last night
Never had that happen before
My head got hit by a brick
The brick wasn’t even there
Said some things that I know aren’t true
But at the time I needed to say
They tried to help and got in the way
But that’s not the way I see it now
Help me find you again
I don’t deserve it but I need it
Selfishness, I learned my lesson
I hope I learned my lesson
Said some things I want back
Said some things that we all want back
Changed everything
Whether it did or not
It’s changed
So sorry
So sorry
I am so sorry…
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Lost Two Good Friends Last Night

Contributed by Ari on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 09:15:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Lost two good friends last night
Said what was on my mind
But my mind was not
In the right space and time
Panic attack set in the present
Thinking about the past and future
Got confused, which road to take
They were there to help
I didn’t believe them then
But I believe them now
That they’re gone
Lost two good friends last night
Never had that happen before
My head got hit by a brick
The brick wasn’t even there
Said some things that I know aren’t true
But at the time I needed to say
They tried to help and got in the way
But that’s not the way I see it now
Help me find you again
I don’t deserve it but I need it
Selfishness, I learned my lesson
I hope I learned my lesson
Said some things I want back
Said some things that we all want back
Changed everything
Whether it did or not
It’s changed
So sorry
So sorry
I am so sorry…

Copyright Â© Ari ... [ 2007-05-19 21:15:50]
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Re: Lost Two Good Friends Last Night (User Rating: 1 )
by justagirl82 on Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 10:06:51 AM AEST
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I'm sorry about your friends. I'm not very good at giving advice. So, I'll I have to say is be strong and fight for what you want. Good write and Good luck.
~martha

Re: Lost Two Good Friends Last Night (User Rating: 1 )
by judasman on Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 10:47:17 AM AEST
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time to go crawling full of apologies. if they are true good friends they will listen and let you rebuild the bridges. hope it all works out for you. poem was i thought honest and emotional

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