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I DON'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE

NEVER MENT TO MAKE YOU CRY

BUT NOTHING I SAY

NOTHING I CAN DO

CAN KEEP ME LOVING YOU

DON'T WANT TO FALL APART

DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOUR LOVE

BUT BABY YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE

THIS WAS OUR ONE LAST LOVERS DANCE

SO JUST TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO

JUST LEAVE ME HERE TO STAY

DON'T TAKE ME FAR AWAY

JUST PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY

I KNOW WE HAD OUR TIMES

BUT TIME WILL ALWAYS CHANGE

THE FEELINGS WE HAVE HAD

ARE DEAD AND BURIED NOW

DON'T GIVE ME THAT GUILTY LOOK

I KNOW THAT'S HOW YOU WORK

SO PLEASE JUST LEAVE ME BE

SO JUST TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO

JUST LEAVE ME HERE TO STAY

DON'T TAKE MY LIFE AWAY

PLEASE SLOWELY WALK AWAY

DON'T BREAK MY HEART AGAIN

YOU DON'T HAVE TO UNDERSTAND

THIS LOVE I FELT FOR YOU

HAS SLOWELY DRIFTED AWAY

NOW PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY

I KNOW YOU WANT TO STAY

BUT OUR LOVE HAS WENT ASTRAY

PLEASE TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO

JUST LEAVE ME HERE ALONE

DON'T TRY TO STAY WITH ME

JUST SLOWELY WALK AWAY

PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY

THERE'S NOTHING HERE FOR YOU

JUST WALK AWAY !!!!!!!!!!

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WALK AWAY

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 02:28:49 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I DON'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE

NEVER MENT TO MAKE YOU CRY

BUT NOTHING I SAY

NOTHING I CAN DO

CAN KEEP ME LOVING YOU

DON'T WANT TO FALL APART

DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOUR LOVE

BUT BABY YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE

THIS WAS OUR ONE LAST LOVERS DANCE

SO JUST TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO

JUST LEAVE ME HERE TO STAY

DON'T TAKE ME FAR AWAY

JUST PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY

I KNOW WE HAD OUR TIMES

BUT TIME WILL ALWAYS CHANGE

THE FEELINGS WE HAVE HAD

ARE DEAD AND BURIED NOW

DON'T GIVE ME THAT GUILTY LOOK

I KNOW THAT'S HOW YOU WORK

SO PLEASE JUST LEAVE ME BE

SO JUST TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO

JUST LEAVE ME HERE TO STAY

DON'T TAKE MY LIFE AWAY

PLEASE SLOWELY WALK AWAY

DON'T BREAK MY HEART AGAIN

YOU DON'T HAVE TO UNDERSTAND

THIS LOVE I FELT FOR YOU

HAS SLOWELY DRIFTED AWAY

NOW PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY

I KNOW YOU WANT TO STAY

BUT OUR LOVE HAS WENT ASTRAY

PLEASE TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO

JUST LEAVE ME HERE ALONE

DON'T TRY TO STAY WITH ME

JUST SLOWELY WALK AWAY

PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY

THERE'S NOTHING HERE FOR YOU

JUST WALK AWAY !!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-05-19 14:28:49]
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Re: WALK AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 05:08:20 PM AEST
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Just a comment...i know its a poem and might not voice your own thoughts...but if a person wants the other to walk away..is there no chance of him./ her reverthin their stance on a later date? or should the one who is hurt just move on...and not keep any hope!!!

Re: WALK AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 06:30:39 PM AEST
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i can imagine music to this honestly. It has a soft rock feel. As a poem, it strays from the traditional form a bit which in my opinion gives it a unique flare. I enjoyed the emotion beind it. Though i was sad about there being little imagry, though in truth, the poem didn't need it. It got the message across clear and loud and and a wonderful flow to it. All in all, good write and you should look into making it a song

Re: WALK AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 06:42:06 AM AEST
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Well walking away sometimes makes it easier to deal with....hm good point (mad )poet made, yet.....thats a question for ones' inner feelings to ask ones self..IF you really LOVE the person, as "being in love" and they are worth fighting for.....then DO IT! Loved the words, could feel what one is going through..

Love and hugs
Brew~

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