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But it comes as no great surprise
As I cannot see the color from the sun’s rays—
Only the varying grays.
My life has led me to this road:
One that devils had no need to goad
Me in taking;
This path is from my own making.
I am a failure: profound and true;
I need no reminding; it’s nothing new.
Always trying to progress
But finding myself more and more in distress
I fall back and back
With never a moment’s slack.
How can they expect me to succeed
Or even to proceed
When my sight is lost and I cannot see?
All that I dreamed, now, will never be. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 13 [informant] => zeldianus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Film 4307 – 41107

Contributed by zeldianus on Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 09:35:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A film has covered my eyes;
But it comes as no great surprise
As I cannot see the color from the sun’s rays—
Only the varying grays.
My life has led me to this road:
One that devils had no need to goad
Me in taking;
This path is from my own making.
I am a failure: profound and true;
I need no reminding; it’s nothing new.
Always trying to progress
But finding myself more and more in distress
I fall back and back
With never a moment’s slack.
How can they expect me to succeed
Or even to proceed
When my sight is lost and I cannot see?
All that I dreamed, now, will never be.

Copyright Â© zeldianus ... [ 2007-05-10 09:35:16]
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Re: The Film 4307 – 41107 (User Rating: 1 )
by Caz on Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 08:51:21 PM AEST
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wow, that is pretty damn good. In parts of it i can relate... I looove the words you have used to ryhm also. Great peice. =D

Re: The Film 4307 – 41107 (User Rating: 1 )
by justagirl82 on Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 04:03:05 AM AEST
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What else can you do but prove them wrong? My advice, fight until your last breath for everything you don't or can't have. Good Write. Thank You!

Re: The Film 4307 – 41107 (User Rating: 1 )
by Smigit on Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 05:32:30 PM AEST
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I usually don't enjoy 'A' 'B' ryhme schemes but, you pulled it off. It's nice.

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