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Array ( [sid] => 134198 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silence [time] => 2007-05-08 11:22:06 [hometext] => a old write on revenge [bodytext] => I`m here to avenge nothing
the task was well preformed.
Im here the moment, gone forever
the better choice, no tear.

I stand in silence,
amoung the rubble
they don`t know me never will.

Some tasks a bounty
some tasks were pain
this memory will fade.

Forever after,
hollow thought
a giver and taker in life.

What you see
is your own creation
and scares you.

what I am has wept, and forgiven...Vincent [comments] => 6 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Silence

Contributed by crow on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 11:22:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I`m here to avenge nothing
the task was well preformed.
Im here the moment, gone forever
the better choice, no tear.

I stand in silence,
amoung the rubble
they don`t know me never will.

Some tasks a bounty
some tasks were pain
this memory will fade.

Forever after,
hollow thought
a giver and taker in life.

What you see
is your own creation
and scares you.

what I am has wept, and forgiven...Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-05-08 11:22:06]
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Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 12:01:00 PM AEST
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A very nice write..
C.S

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 12:18:25 PM AEST
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So the tongue silences what ever was put in front......well maybe for the best

We all cant have silence and no........well Ok I wont judge ..I dont know. I do know when someone speaks they should know.its MEANT.......so dont hurt hearts

Hugs
Brew~

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 03:24:36 PM AEST
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wow, Vincent, this is incredible. I am always so
astounded how you can say something so powerful
with so few words. The last line is very potent!

Exceptional, my friend.

~Breezy

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 04:16:18 PM AEST
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Awesome work friend.
huggs,
emy

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 04:56:18 PM AEST
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Excellent write

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:47:17 AM AEST
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This holds alot of meaning my friend as all of them do.

hugs
~Michelle~

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