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I tried to let you go
but I was falling more in love instead
Dreaming in my mind
that you were here, lying in my bed

My thoughts, were getting the best of me
wishing my dreams, were actually true
That you were really here
and I was making love to you

What are you going to do
when all your thoughts, are like this
Thinking about, all you enjoyed
and now, are forced to miss

Just walking hand in hand
enjoying, what we saw
Looking, into your eyes
I had a feeling of awe

This dream, will have to pass
and I will let it go
What would have happend, in real life
I will never know [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I Tried To Let You Go (Dream)

Contributed by bruce on Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 06:43:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I Tried To Let You Go,( Dream)

I tried to let you go
but I was falling more in love instead
Dreaming in my mind
that you were here, lying in my bed

My thoughts, were getting the best of me
wishing my dreams, were actually true
That you were really here
and I was making love to you

What are you going to do
when all your thoughts, are like this
Thinking about, all you enjoyed
and now, are forced to miss

Just walking hand in hand
enjoying, what we saw
Looking, into your eyes
I had a feeling of awe

This dream, will have to pass
and I will let it go
What would have happend, in real life
I will never know

Copyright © bruce ... [ 2007-05-06 18:43:01]
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Re: I Tried To Let You Go (Dream) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 12:10:57 AM AEST
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Oh Bruce,
this one seems so sad. What happened??

Michelle

Re: I Tried To Let You Go (Dream) (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 02:29:05 AM AEST
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Oh Bruce is this true life. your poetry is always so heartfelt. In dreams , yes, I wrote one about that too. Sad and emotional. Sue xx

Re: I Tried To Let You Go (Dream) (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 03:39:24 PM AEST
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Dreams and real life at times seem to cross one another 's path, the dream being the in love part and the real life being the love after the in love segment is over, i'll always opt 4 the real life part, being perhaps the dream is more of a lesson on what one may or may not have done. In any case hang in there one thing i do know the mind itself just won't let you dwell on this for ever, it can't as long as your aliveor it ain't doing the job it's supposed to be doing. there'll come a time you'll not only wake up from the dream, but will virtual hate your self for getting over this and moving on.possibly wondering what's wrong with you? . . . absolutely nothing, your just alive. Beautiful work you produce. take care.

Ben

Ben

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