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Array ( [sid] => 134125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moving On [time] => 2007-05-05 10:40:37 [hometext] => the best work so far [bodytext] => i know i said its over
thats how the story goes
but i just want you happy
there so much that you dont know

i hope you find your someone
and never live for yesterday
for long the past has been unfair
but youll be better off this way

im sure that ill get better
ill soon throw away the blade
but happiness is only found
im the memories ive made

so please dont make my same mistakes
never forget about whats real
and promise youll never cut
when you really need to feel

there will never be another
who could be half as good as you
i swear to you ill always miss
the things youd say and do

since the it ended
my life has fallen apart
another teenaged tragedy
another set of broken hearts

i hear youve moved on
i really think its great
i told you it would happen
and shes even in your state

i hope that you stay happy
i wish you the best of luck
i hope this girl wont make you cut
cause that would really suck

id have to track her down
and show her some real pain
and once again id show the world
how ex's go insane :)

i know that its so weird
for me to write this for you
but it really clears things up
and i dont know what else to do [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 22 [informant] => random_kisses_xoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Moving On

Contributed by random_kisses_xoxo on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 10:40:37 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



i know i said its over
thats how the story goes
but i just want you happy
there so much that you dont know

i hope you find your someone
and never live for yesterday
for long the past has been unfair
but youll be better off this way

im sure that ill get better
ill soon throw away the blade
but happiness is only found
im the memories ive made

so please dont make my same mistakes
never forget about whats real
and promise youll never cut
when you really need to feel

there will never be another
who could be half as good as you
i swear to you ill always miss
the things youd say and do

since the it ended
my life has fallen apart
another teenaged tragedy
another set of broken hearts

i hear youve moved on
i really think its great
i told you it would happen
and shes even in your state

i hope that you stay happy
i wish you the best of luck
i hope this girl wont make you cut
cause that would really suck

id have to track her down
and show her some real pain
and once again id show the world
how ex's go insane :)

i know that its so weird
for me to write this for you
but it really clears things up
and i dont know what else to do




Copyright © random_kisses_xoxo ... [ 2007-05-05 10:40:37]
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Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessi95 on Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 08:08:27 PM AEST
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This is really good, Good job




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