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Array ( [sid] => 134092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nature Alone [time] => 2007-05-04 10:33:36 [hometext] => I was wondering if Nature feels as we do-and this is what inspired me to write this poem. [bodytext] => Can the sea so pensive and alive at night
Ever drown itself and see true delight

Can the moon so high burning bright
Ever look within itself and vanish from sight

Can the stars that shine with a desperate plea
Ever shed a tear that everyone can see

Can the whispering motions of a wind alive
Ever grow tired and hope to die

Can the sand of countless grains it seems
Ever count itself and surrender and flee

Can this night without a sun to hide
Ever stop to breathe and cease to dream

Can this nature with all its beauties in sight
Ever fade away and leave me to cry.
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Nature Alone

Contributed by scrivonel on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 10:33:36 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Can the sea so pensive and alive at night
Ever drown itself and see true delight

Can the moon so high burning bright
Ever look within itself and vanish from sight

Can the stars that shine with a desperate plea
Ever shed a tear that everyone can see

Can the whispering motions of a wind alive
Ever grow tired and hope to die

Can the sand of countless grains it seems
Ever count itself and surrender and flee

Can this night without a sun to hide
Ever stop to breathe and cease to dream

Can this nature with all its beauties in sight
Ever fade away and leave me to cry.

Copyright © scrivonel ... [ 2007-05-04 10:33:36]
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Re: Nature Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 06:13:51 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem, slow and ponderous it made me consider your words carefully.
You pose some interesting thoughts/questions that we might well all have considered when thinking about the immensity and majesty of nature.

Nice write, take care,
Dom

Re: Nature Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 12:39:24 PM AEST
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Wonderfull, i considered your words with admiraiton, i love your question in nature, i too feel connected to all elements of the universe at times...well done

Re: Nature Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 03:09:01 PM AEST
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Wonderfully done my friend...and ponder yes I will for these are questions one should absolutely be asking.

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