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Array ( [sid] => 133639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where I Seethe [time] => 2007-04-19 14:14:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Not thinking 'bout what is or not
Not scared if it starts or stops
Not worried to fill the spot
Just want you to know my thought
Not afraid to pick up or drop
To walk around where I bought
All my agony, sins, joy, and ideas of home

Not thinking why or what might be
Not caring if is can see
Not hurt by what's been free
Not ashamed to give up or breethe
I'm alive, walking where I seethe
My ideas of home, sins, joy, and agony

I'm just walking around
Alive today
Yet still far away
Because twisting I found
It's in the day
I am okay
On this ground

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Where I Seethe

Contributed by rhei76 on Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 02:14:47 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Not thinking 'bout what is or not
Not scared if it starts or stops
Not worried to fill the spot
Just want you to know my thought
Not afraid to pick up or drop
To walk around where I bought
All my agony, sins, joy, and ideas of home

Not thinking why or what might be
Not caring if is can see
Not hurt by what's been free
Not ashamed to give up or breethe
I'm alive, walking where I seethe
My ideas of home, sins, joy, and agony

I'm just walking around
Alive today
Yet still far away
Because twisting I found
It's in the day
I am okay
On this ground

Not worried to feel a spark

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2007-04-19 14:14:47]
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Re: Where I Seethe (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 05:01:15 PM AEST
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Very deep, powerfull, thought provoking write,
huggs,
emy

Re: Where I Seethe (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Saturday, 21st April 2007 @ 09:31:55 AM AEST
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great read...thank you for sharing this... i like the phrase 'twisting i found its in the day' certain days can make someone feel this way yet they know they must take it one day at a time.... this is what i got from this line.. i hope i am close.

Re: Where I Seethe (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 03:33:11 AM AEST
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I love the last stanza and the last line. This was a beautifully written poem. Great poem. Well expressed.

Take care
Christina

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